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journalists did not keep personnel opinions out of thier writing
Journalists did not keep personal opinions out of their writing.
We wanted to go to the matinee to save some cash. There were only seats available in the evening.
We wanted to go to the matinee to save some cash, but there were only seats available in the evening.
his brother enlisted in the army last tuesday
His brother enlisted in the army last Tuesday.
Our class has been studying poetry last quarter.
Our class studied poetry last quarter.
How many points can you earn on your SCR?
2
the 5 lines of The Death of the Ball Turret Gunner make up one of the most famous World War II poems
The five lines of "The Death of the Ball Turret Gunner make up one of the most famous World War II poems.
She really wanted to play on the team. Last week she broke her ankle/
She really wanted to be on the team, (but/however) last week she broke her ankle.
theirs was a tough assignment our's was easier
Theirs was a tough assignment; ours was easier.
How many points can you earn on your ECR?
10
William carlos williams was a medical Dr. he also happened to be a Poet
William Carlos Williams was a medical doctor; he also happened to be a poet.
Tonight night our soccer team was scheduled to compete for the district title. When the ice storm hit last night it was canceled.
Tonight night our soccer team was scheduled to compete for the district title, but when the ice storm hit last night it was canceled.
some authors adopt pen names or pseudonyms to protect their privacy
Some authors adopt pen names, or pseudonyms, to protect their privacy.
The lady in the green car is my basketball coach she is coming with us to the tournament.
The lady in the green car is my basketball coach; she is coming with us to the tournament.
What is the minimum number of paragraphs your ECR should have?
wallace stevens was not only a poet but also an executive in an insurance co.
Wallace Stevens was not only a poet but also an executive in an insurance company.
If you finish your credits. You can graduate early.
If you finish your credits, you can graduate early.
all right! the captain growled who woke me up
"All right!" the captain growled. "Who woke me up?"
People like to shop at the mall. Because they have access to a lot of stores. May to go to the food court, and for great sales.
People like to shop at the mall, because they have access to a lot of stores, may go to the food court, and for great sales.
What does APES stand for?
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Proof
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Summary
stevens poem Anecdote of the Jar challenges the reader quiet a bit
Stevens' poem "Anecdote of the Jar" challenges the reader quite a bit.
Because he was late again. He was kicked out of school.
Because he was late again, he was kicked out of school.
The student complained why can't we listen to our music
The student complained, "Why can't we listen to our music?"
Because there will be a storm. We will be meeting in the commons instead of in the courtyard.
Because there will be a storm, we will be meeting in the commons instead of in the courtyard.
What should paragraph 2 of your ECR contain?
Topic sentence, proof, explanation & summary