Capitalization
In the United States, the first paper money was not introduced until march 10, 1862.
March 10, 1862
Thats why her fans were surprised in 1995 when she published her first book for young children.
That's
He has a dog to.
TOO
Emma must have injoyed her job.
ENJOYED
In the 1970’s, schools in California started celebrating Women’s History Week.
1970s
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On March 19, 1911, a woman named Clara zetkin created the first International Women’s Day.
Clara Zetkin
All the girls dresses were pretty.
All the girls' dresses were pretty.
He ate a apple pie on the 4th of July.
AN Apple
One of the world's most famous magishuns and escape artists was Harry Houdini.
magicians
Crane feathers are made of the same material as human fingernails’.
No apostrophe
her first book, The Outsiders, brought her sudden fame.
Her
S.E. was born Susan Eloise Hinton in Tulsa Oklahoma, on April 22, 1949.
Tulsa, Oklahoma
Houdini was able to brake free from them in an our.
He was able to break free from them in an hour.
Judith Krug, a librarian and activist, beleived people should read whatever they wanted.
believed
It was their, in 1883, that he put on his first magic show.
It was THERE
i've never been to canada, but i have been to france.
I've never been to Canada, but I have been to France.
Every time you hear an operator say What city, please?" you should think of Emma Nutt.
Every time you hear an operator say "What city, please?" you should think of Emma Nutt.
Now we can look back and see what great things women has done through out the years.
HAVE DONE
S.E. Hinton is an author best nown for righting novels for young adults.
known, writing
On that day, the United States government issued it’s first paper money in the form of $5, $10, and $20 bill.
Its (it does not have a possessive)