The sentence is: "Did you know Paul that some people do not like to play soccer?"
What is: "Did you know, Paul, that some people do not like to play soccer?"
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The sentence is: There dog is really cute!
What is : Their dog is really cute! (CHANGE THERE TO THEIR)
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The sentence is: Did you know, for example, that there is a fish that can climb trees.
What is: Did you know, for example, that there is a fish that can climb trees? (CHANGE THE PERIOD TO A QUESTION MARK)
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Dogs are nice animals.
These furry creatures are amazing, caring family members that provide lots of love.
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The sentence is: I ran out the door to jump into my pool and as soon as I jumped in I saw a crack of lightning.
What is: I ran out the door to jump into my pool, BUT as soon as a I jumped in I saw a crack of lightning. (WHEN TWO PARTS ARE DIFFERENT, USE BUT AS CONJUNCTION)
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The sentence is : John was expected to study his Spelling words finish his Math problems and read for twenty minutes.
What is: John was expected to study his Spelling words, finish his Math problems, and read for twenty minutes. ?
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The sentence is: I am going too the zoo this weekend.
What is: I am going TO the zoo this weekend.
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The sentence is: The pumpkin should weigh at least 500 pounds the best ones are usually closer to 700 pounds.
What is: The pumpkin should weigh at least 500 pounds, but the best ones are usually closer to 700 pounds. (INSERT COMMA AND CONJUNCTION - "BUT")
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It is very, very important to make sure you pick the right movie.
Choosing the correct film can be extremely difficult, but having your interests in mind, can make a huge difference.
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The sentence is: Sue and her mom went to the movie, but they also went out to eat.
What is: Sue and her mom went to the movie, AND they also went out to eat.
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The sentence is: Johns book was accidentally left out on the playground.
What is: John's book was accidentally left out on the playground.
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The sentence is: Your going to have to finish the test before you can play a game on the computer.
What is: YOU'RE (YOU ARE) going to have to finish the test before you can play a game on the computer.
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The sentence is: How would you get rid of a huge colony of bees!
What is: How would you get rid of a huge colony of bees? (CHANGE EXCLAMATION POINT TO QUESTION MARK)
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Having homework is bad.
The horrible task of taking work home is the worst punishment a student can receive.
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The sentence is:In obedience class the dogs learn to sit.
They also learn to lay down.
What is: In dog obedience class the dogs learn to sit, AND they learn to lay down.
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The sentences is: We went to Chicago Illinois for our vacation.
What is: We went to Chicago, Illinois, for our vacation. ?
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The sentence is: Did you loose your book?
What is: Did you LOSE your book?
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The sentence is: Cameron asked, can we have pizza and ice cream for dinner?
What is: Cameron asked, "Can we have pizza and ice cream for dinner?" INSERT QUOTATION MARKS BEGINNING AND END
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You have to be a good friend because then you could have a friend, too.
Giving your friendship can be extremely challenging at times, but very rewarding.
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The sentence is: Most people had already left town. Dolley would not go until she had packed all of her most valuable things.
What is : Most people had already left town, BUT Dolley would not go until she had packed all of her most valuable things.
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The sentence is: Believe it or not some people do not like pizza.
What is: Believe it or not, some people do not like pizza.
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The sentence is: Are family loves to go camping.
What is: OUR (YOUR) family loves to go camping.
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The sentence is: It was beginning to get late but Dad kept his promise.
What is: It was beginning to get late,(COMMA) but Dad kept his promise.
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People need to go to school because for you can be smarter.
A college degree can help advance your education and career goals.
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The sentence is: Bike riding can be very enjoyable. It does have some risks.
What is: Bike riding can be very enjoyable, BUT it does have some risks.