Revising and Editing Questions 1
What correction should be made to this sentence? Last summer my family went to visit Aunt Hilda in alaska.
Alaska is the name of a state-capitalize it!
What change, if any, should be made in this sentence? On saturday the beekeepers came to our house.
Saturday is the name of a day of week. It should be capitalized!
What change, if any, should be made in the sentence? Mrs.Worling sounded fearfull, but Talon wasn't.
Change fearfull to fearful.
What does the A in UNWRAP stand for?
Answer the questions
When you get a spelling type revising and editing question you should use a ____________ to help you.
Dictionary
What correction should be made to this sentence? Gertrude Ederle was a great american swimmer.
American is a nationality-capitalize it!
What change, if any, should be made to the following sentence? I woked up and did not remember where I was.
Change woked to woke.
Is there a dictionary built into the test?
Yes, there is a dictionary built into the test
____________ is the author's message or lesson in a story
Theme
Character VS Self is a _______________ conflict
Internal
What change, if any, should be made to this sentence? The silk shoots out through tiny tubes in the spiders body.
spiders should be written....spider's showing possession.
What change, if any, should be made to the following sentence? Travis Tran is known for finding ways to waist time in class.
Change waist to waste.
True or False: You can get up and get notebook paper whenever you want.
False, you have to raise your hand and ask
So we can see what we should be looking for when we are reading
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True or False: When I have a paired passed I show read one passage and then answer that passages questions.
True
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What change, if any, should be made to the following sentence? Maya picked peppers watermelons and lettuce to plant in the garden.
Comma in a series...Maya picked peppers, watermelons, and lettuce to plant in the garden.
What correction should be made in this sentence? She had watched skiers perform during the 2010 winter olympics at Whistler Mountain.
Change 2010 winter olympics to 2010 Winter Olympics...It's a name of an event, so capitalize it!
Convey is a fancy word for ____________
Show
___________ is the author's attitude toward _________
tone and writing
Character VS Nature is a _________ conflict
External
What change, if any, should be made in this sentence? He took all the bees away in two boxs.
boxs should be written boxes.
What change, if any, should be made in this sentence? The beekeepers was happy to have all our bees.
Should be... The beekeepers were happy to have all our bees.
Selection means ________________
Passage, story , or poem
"He is a slender flag pole" is an example of ____________
Metaphor
Explain why Ms. Davis wants you to use your strategies, try your best, and ask for notebook paper
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