Jack and Atharv Fun Runs

Run On 1

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AAAWWUBBIS is a form of conjunction and it is a fun name to pronounce.

(Use a comma)

AAAWWUBBIS is a form of conjunction, and it is a fun name to pronounce.

200

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Fanboys and is another acronym and it is a strange pronunciation.

Fanboys and is another acronym, and it is a strange pronunciation.

300

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I own a missive dino and I own a tiny Mii.

I own a missive dino, and I own a tiny Mii.

400

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I lied to my family for I didn't want them to yell like african elephants.

I lied to my family, for I didn't want them to yell like african elephants.

500

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He is nice and he is very smart.

He is nice, and he is very smart.

Run On 2

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Jack Post ran down the street, he was trying to get away from his pet gorilla.

Jack Post ran down the street, for he was trying to get away from his pet gorilla.

200

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She saw somebody from her past, she darted in the other direction.

(Use fanboys)

She saw somebody from her past, and she darted in the other direction.

300

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He owned a T-Rex, he smashed cars all day long.

He owned a T-Rex,and he smashed cars all day long.

400

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I didn't want ice cream, did I want donut cakes.

I didn't want ice cream, nor did I want donut cakes.

500

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I slouched across my couch, I waited eagerly for my Pizza to arrive at my weird and black doorstep in 1800 pennsylvania avenue.

He owned a T-Rex, and he smashed cars all day.

Run On 3

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When he walks down the street everybody envy’s him.

When he walks down the street, everybody envy’s him.

200

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Since Abram owned a car he owed taxes.

Since Abram owned a car, he owed taxes.

300

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When I cross the road I see Atharv on the horizon.

When I cross the road I see Atharv on the horizon.

400

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As he looked down on Mt. Everest he saw Ethan fly his pterodactyl.

As he looked down on Mt. Everest, he saw Ethan fly his pterodactyl.

500

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As I leisurely stroll through the market I grab one tuna casserole, but of course it is Atharv brand.

As I leisurely stroll through the market, I grab one tuna casserole, but of course it is Atharv brand.

Fragments

100

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Part:

ran from his pet pterodactyl.

Part:

Ethan, a historian,

(Combine Sentences)

Ethan, a historian, ran from his pet pterodactyl.

200

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Part:

Atharv, a student who owns a pterodactyl,

Part:

is in 7/8 math.

(Combine)

Atharv, a student who owns a pterodactyl, is in 7/8 math.

300

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Part:

"Students,

Part:

I want you to fix fragments today"

(Combine)

"Students, I want you to fix fragments today"

400

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Part:

malala

Part:

is smart

Part:

and funny

(Combine)

Malala is smart and funny.

500

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Part:

may be true or false

Part:

while theories

Part:

many times they are incorrect.

 While theories may be true or false, many times they are incorrect.

Random

100

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Jack is a mathematician and his middle name is Holton.

Jack is a mathematician, and his middle name is Holton.

200

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I like food

, for they tastes good

and soda

I like food and soda, for they taste good.

300

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is a kind person.

Mary

and loves everybody

Mary is a kind person and loves everybody.

400

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Moses is generous, he is smart, for he is happy.

Moses is nice, and he is smart, for he is happy.

500

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As Rebtas Acist Ronny walked down the street he noticed a penny, it was shiny.

(Uses Multiple Rules)

As Rebtas Acist Ronny walked down the street, he noticed a penny, for it was shiny.