Expository
Personal Narrative
Sentence Structure
How to Get a 4
Revise/Edit Misc.
100
Restate prompt and form an opinion.
What do you do for the 1st 2 sentences of the expository essay?
100
-Question -Dialogue -Conflict -Simile -Onomatopoeia (sound effect) -Any type of figurative language -Middle of the scene
Name one kind of hook you can use.
100
Before school starts, I always brush my teeth.
Where does the comma go in the following sentence? Before school starts I always brush my teeth.
100
(Check Response)
Name one extra thing you can add to your Personal Narrative that will get you a 4.
100
I am extreme happy that you came to the dance. (extremely)
What is wrong with the following sentence? I am extreme happy that you came to the dance.
200
-Personal Example -Real World Example -Emotional Example -Authoritative Example
Name one type of example you can use in your essay.
200
3
How many sentences go in the I learned... paragraph?
200
Trick Question/NOOO Comma! I really like candy and pickles.
Where does the comma go in the following sentence? I really like candy and pickles.
200
(Check Response)
Name one extra thing you can add to your Personal Narrative that will get you a 4.
200
I told my mom if I could go the mall. (asked)
What is wrong with the following sentence? I told my mom if I could go the mall.
300
-Say answer -Example -Explain -Summarize
What does S.E.E.S. stand for?
300
-Hook -Action -Solve the Problem -How does it end? -I learned...
What does H.A.S.H.I. stand for?
300
While my brother was in the living room watching T.V., I was washing the dishes.
Where does the comma go in the following sentence? While my brother was in the living room watching T.V. I was washing the dishes.
300
-I learned...summary -3 sentences at least
What is the most important paragraph in your personal narrative?
300
Your such a good student. (You are)
What is wrong with the following sentence? Your such a good student.
400
Example/Explain
What is the longest paragraph of the essay?
400
-Who -What -When -Where -Why
What are the 5 -Ws you should include in your narrative?
400
I love school, and I love sports.
Where does the comma go in the following sentence? I love school and I love sports.
400
The HOOK
What is the 2nd most important part of the personal narrative essay.
400
There dog is very cute. (Their)
What is wrong with the following sentence? There dog is very cute.
500
-Go back to the restatement and the prompt.
What do you include in your summary?
500
-Plot Chart -Plot Diagram
What do you draw on your paper to help you organize the events in the story?
500
Mrs. Hill, who teaches at K.M.S., is really cool.
Where does the comma go in the following sentence? Mrs. Hill who teaches at K.M.S. is really cool.
500
-See -Smell -Taste -Touch -Hear
What is imagery? How does it help the reader?
500
The dogs are so cute. It has fluffy, orange fur. (They have)
What is wrong with the following sentence. The dogs are so cute. It has fluffy, orange fur.
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