Extended Response Plan
What is the first paragraph of the extended response called?
What is Introduction?
What is the last box on your plan for?
What is a Conclusion?
How many sentences is the short answer response answer supposed to be?
3!
What score would this student have received and why?
In “Excerpt from Presidential Pets,” what is the most likely reason that Barack Obama decided to get a new puppy when he was elected president? Use two details from the article to support your response.
He got a new puppy when he went into the White house. I think he got it so his kids wouldn't get lonely. I think that because it says that their mom is the most busiest and famous women in the worked and that their dad has the most important job in America. I also think they got it because they were going through big changes. I think this because it said that they had to go to a new school and move out of Chicago. This is why I think they got the puppy.
Score Point 2 (out of 2 points)
This response makes a valid inference from the text to explain the most likely reason that Barack Obama decided to get a new puppy when he was elected president (they were going through big changes). The response provides a sufficient number of concrete details from the text for support as required by the prompt (their mom is the most busiest and famous women in the world and that their dad has the most important job in America and they had to go to a new school and move out of Chicago). This response includes complete sentences where errors do not impact readability.
How many texts are on Day 2
3
What is the next sentence after I include a detail and the first explanation
What are Transitions?
What is box 3 for?
What is Body paragraph 2?
What is the structure of a short answer response?
What is
A- Answer
D- Detail
D- Detail
According to “Excerpt from Presidential Pets,” how have pets historically affected life at the White House? Use two details from the article to support your response.
Pets have historically affected life at the white house by comforting the president during his job. i know this because in the article it said, " Pets can force a busy president to make time for fun." and, "pets can give friendship to someone doing a hard and lonely job."
Score Point 2 (out of 2 points)
This response makes a valid inference from the text to explain how pets historically affected life at the White House (by comforting the president during his job). The response provides a sufficient number of concrete details from the text for support as required by the prompt (Pets can force a busy president to make time for fun and pets can give friendship to someone doing a hard and lonley job). This response includes complete sentences where errors do not impact readability.
What is the difference between quoting and paraphrasing?
Quoting= directly from the text
Paraphrasing= rephrasing in your own words, but with the same meaning
What is the last paragraph in a Extended Response?
What is a Conclusion?
What is a hallmark moment?
A Hallmark moment is a sentence in the conclusion that leads the reader wondering and thinking..
What is paraphrasing?
What is to repeat something that is written using different words, but keeps the same meaning.
How does Pearl's father feel about Pearl and JBIII walking to school by themselves?
"Pearl's father doesn't feel good about Pearl and JBIII walking to school by themselves because he doesn't like changes and whether it was good or bad.
1 point
This response provides a valid inference from the text to explain how Pearl's father feels about Pearl and JBIII walking to school by themselves, however the response only provides one concrete detail from the text for support.
What is the structure of a extended response backwards?
Hallmark Moment, Differences of the two text, Restate the claim
Body Paragraph 2 Concluding sentence, explanation, Detail 2, transition, explanation, Detail 1, topic sentence/title
Body Paragraph 1 Concluding sentence, explanation, Detail 2, transition, explanation, Detail 1, topic sentence/ title
Introduction: thesis, similarities, titles, answer/intro sentence
What part of the body paragraphs come directly from the text?
What are Details?
What do you do when you start Day 2?
What is Read the Extended Response prompt?
True or false: I write an explanation for my details
How does Pearl's father feel about Pearl and JBIII walking to school by themselves?
"Pearl's studying how to smile for pujter day there parents can not wait to see the Puriters I going to look so cool and a big happy face. So he feels so cool with his new bowtie.
This response does not address any of the requirements of the prompt.
What is Ms. Sclavos favorite sport?
Basketball
What is the first sentence you write on your plan?
Answer the question/Claim
Explain, what is the introduction?
Your claim with and similarities and thesis
What type of question is the below:
"How does paragraph 23 contribute to the moral of the story?"
What is Part to whole
What do Lily and Jasper's points of view reveal about the drawing?
" Lily said it looked like planets I think she said that because theres lots of big shapes and its colorful. Jasper said it look like a coral reef because theres light colors and the color few patterns might look like fish.
1 point
This response provides a sufficient number of concrete details from the text for support as required by the prompt. The response does not provide a valid inference from the text to explain what Lily and Jasper's points of view reveal about the drawing.
Lawyer