Run-On Sentence
Yesterday I walked the dog today I gave him food.
Yes: It has two independent clauses in one sentence without proper punctuation or conjunction
What is the narrative hook used for?
To engage the reader
Although she wanted to go to the park, the rain started pouring, so she decided to stay home and read the book she'd been meaning to finish.
No: Although it may seem like it, this is not a run-on sentence because it has proper punctuation with the commas
where is a narritive hook found in a story
The begining
I love pizza it is my favorite food.
Yes: This is a run-on sentence because it has two independent clauses that don't have proper punctuation or conjunctions
A narrative hook often raises this, which keeps readers wanting to learn more.
Curiosity
Despite the fact that the clock was ticking loudly, the dog was barking incessantly, and the neighbors were arguing next door, she managed to focus entirely on her book, lost in the intricacies of the story and oblivious to the chaos around her.
No: This sentence uses proper punctuation
A narrative hook should not reveal...
Major story points and excessive detail about the story, it should hook the reader in while not giving the story away
The waves crashed against the rocks spraying saltwater into the air as the wind howled through the empty cove.
No: this is also not a run on sentence because it has a proper conjunction
A narritive hook should not have a...
mundane or boring introduction