A
1) Three pictures that describe me
2) 3 pictures that describe me
Numbers lower than ten are usually written with letters :-)
1) My biggest hobby is probably clothing
2) My favorite hobby is probably clothing
This sentence is not necessarily wrong, but "biggest" could be intepreted differently that what the pupil meant to say.
1) That's a pic that I have taken in Austria of my two skiing best friends
2) That's a pic that I have taken in Austria of two my best friends skiing.
3) That's a picture that I had been taken in Austria of two of my best friends skiing.
2) That's a pic that I have taken in Austria of two my best friends skiing.
- Sentence structure
1) I live with my parents in an apartment on the street Grundtvigsvej.
2) I liv ewith my parents in an apartment on Grundtvigsvej.
Minor detail:
- Street can be omitted from the sentence
1) My other passion is to make delicious cocktails for me and my girlfriends. My favorite cocktail is Mojito.
2)My other passion is to make delicious cocktail for me and my girlfriends. My favorite cocktail is a Mojito ofc.
1) My other passion is to make delicious cocktails for me and my girlfriends. My favorite cocktail is Mojito.
- "ofc"
- No need for the article "a" in front of mojito when you speak of something general.
1) Interest: Hanging with friends, drinking mojito, listening to music, being active, being spontaneous and more
2)Interest: Hanging with friends, Drinking mojito, hearing music, being active, being spontaneous and more
1) Interest: Hanging with friends, drinking mojito, listening to music, being active, being spontaneous and more
Listen: Active
Hear: Passive
What is wrong with this sentence:
There are three things I love: Eating my family and not using commas.
Use of commas :-)
1) I also travel a lot i have been in Denmark, Sweden, Norway, Germany, Netherlands, Belgium, Belarus, Qatar, France, Portugal, Spain, Polen, Croatia, Italy, Malaysia, Indonesia and Trinidad and Tobago.
2) I also travel a lot, I have been to Denmark, Sweden, Norway, Germany, Netherlands, Belgium, Belarus, Qatar, France, Portugal, Spain, Polen, Croatia, Italy, Malaysia, Indonesia and Trinidad and Tobago.
2) I also travel a lot, I have been to Denmark, Sweden, Norway, Germany, Netherlands, Belgium, Belarus, Qatar, France, Portugal, Spain, Polen, Croatia, Italy, Malaysia, Indonesia and Trinidad and Tobago.
- Capital "I"
- Preposition - you have been "to" a country not "in" the country
Which of these sentences are correct?
1) "I Live in Frederiksberg with my mom and dad"
2) "I live in Frederiksberg with my Mom and Dad"
"I live in Frederiksberg with my Mom and Dad"
1) I love to sleep and relax
2) I love sleeping at relaxing
1) I love to sleep and relax
Present continuous is not used when talking about static verbs. (something general)
It's not just one night of sleep the pupil loves - it's a general thing that she loves to sleep.
1) i have a father that named Niels and a mother that named Janne and a brother named Jonathan
2) I have a father named Niels, a mother named Janne, and a brother named Jonathan.
2) I have a father named Niels, a mother named Janne, and a brother named Jonathan.
- Capital "I"
- Comma to seperate names
- that's named - but named would be sufficient.
1) when im bored I engage in some computergames, and somtimes just sleeping will do it for me.
2) When im bored, I play computer games, and sometimes just sleeping is enough
2) When im bored, I play computer games, and sometimes just sleeping is enough
- The word "engage" can be replaced by "play"
- "will do it for me" could be replaced by "is enough"
I like to out with my friends and play football.
I like hanging out with my friends and play football.
I like to hang out with my friends and play football.
The ing form is not used to express habitual actions such as "I Like"
1) This summer i was in Serbia and visited friends and family, i was there in 2 weeks.
2) This summer, i was in Serbia and visited friends and family. I was there for two weeks.
This summer, i was in Serbia and visited friends and family. I was there for two weeks.
1) I also love just having a chill night where I see some movies or some series.
2) I also love just having a chill night, where i watch movies or series.
Correct sentence:
2) I also love just having a chill night, where i watch movies or series.
You watch television but you have seen a rainbow.
Intentionally / Unintentionally.
1) This summer, I went on vacation to France and Monaco. I went there to see cars, thats because I'm a car enthusiast.
2) This summer, I went on vacation to France and Monaco. I went there to see cars; that's because I'm a car enthusiast.
2) This summer, I went on vacation to France and Monaco. I went there to see cars; that's because I'm a car enthusiast.
- Apostrophe (that's)
- Could use semi colon for better structure but that's a minor detail.
1) My father came to Denmark first. I didn't know that he was alive because I wasn't born at that time
2) my father came to denmark first i dindt know that he was alive because i wasnt born in that time.
1) My father came to Denmark first. I didn't know that he was alive because I wasn't born at that time
- Start sentence with capital letter / Capital "I"
- Preposition: at that time
- Wasn't
1) I enjoy traveling and I have visited a variety of locations. I will soon be in Tokyo, Japan.
2) I enjoy traveling, having visited a variety of locations, and will soon be in Tokyo, Japan.
- Punctuation
- I have visited (the actions is finished) - Present perfect
Which word should be changed to make the sentence correct?
I also have a mother and a father wich names are Niels and Janne.
Which to Whoose
Correct sentence:
I also have a mother and a father whoose names are Niels and Janne.
1) ...and off couse who doesent like the sommerbreak, some times you just need a break from all the work.
2) ...and ofcourse who doesn't like the sommer break? Some times you just need a break from all the work.
2) ...and of course who doesn't like the sommer break? Sometimes you just need a break from all the work.
- of course
- n't
- ?
- Sometimes