Intro and Counterclaim
How many sentences was our Joe Hill intro required to have?
8-10 sentences
What format did our body paragraphs have to be?
RACECECES
What is the official name of the final Joe Hill revsion?
When was Joe Hill Born?
October 7th, 1879.
From what online website did Anna get this assignment.
The BYU Joe Hill and Labor Unions website.
What format did our intro paragraphs have?
A hook, a bridge, and a claim.
In the RACECECES, what does the RA stand for?
The RA in RACECECES stands for Read and Restate, and Answer.
What did we have to do for the final revision?
We had to remove all of the dead words that we decided in the biography.
Where was Joe Hill born?
Gavle, Sweden
Which source explained the entire life of Joe Hill in a creative and detailed manner?
The Graphic Novel "Joe Hill: His Story" by Pat Bagley.
What format does our counterclaim paragraph contain?
Our counterclaim has to have a claim from an opposing argument, a piece of evidence that supports that claim, and a rebuttal saying why that claim is stupid.
How many cited quotes were required per body paragraph?
A total of 3 cited quotes were required in our body paragraphs.
What are all of the passive verbs that we had to remove?
We had to remove is, are, am, was, were, have, having, had, be, being, been.
What labor union organization was Joe Hill a part of?
Joe Hill was part of the Industrial Workers of the World, or IWW.
Which source was a letter from Eugene Debs asking the Governer of Utah to give Joe Hill clemency?
The Clemency Plea
In the intro, what is a good hook?
A good hook can be anything that grabs the reader's attention, such as a quote from an expert, statistics, humor of some sort, etc.
What is the total minimum number of sources we are required to have in our entire Joe Hill Essay?
We are required to have at least 5 different sources, with 9 being reccomended.
What is the second thing that we had to do for the final revision?
Why was Joe Hill sentenced to death?
Joe Hill was sentenced to death for the murder of John and Arling Morrisson.
What did the mural painted in 2016 depict?
The mural depicted Joe Hill's face with several of his inspirational quotes.
What is the point of a counterclaim?
The point of a counterclaim is to tell the readers why the opposing argument does not make sense, and why your claim is better.
What 2 questions did we pick from to answer?
To what extent did Joe Hill's involvement in labor unions and his status in labor unions influence the perception of his trial?
Why was there such an outpouring of support and opposition surround Joe Hill's trial?
What are the ten things that we were graded on for our final revision rubric?
We were graded on our Audience and Purpose, Introduction, Thesis Statement, Organization, Evidence, Elaboration, Counterclaim, Language, Conventions, and our Conclusion.
In what way was Jope Hill killed, and where was he killed?
Joe hill was executed by a firing squad right across the street from nowadays sugarhouse park.
Where were we allowed to obtain our information.
We were allowed to get our information from any of the sources that Anna gave us, or from any other source that passed either the CRAAP or the SIFT test.