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go in the picnic
go for a picnic
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on the park
in the park
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in Saturday
on Saturday
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skeytboard / scateboard
skateboard
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they wants to buy
they want to buy
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go to shopping
go shopping
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go to park
go to the park
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to 9 p.m.
at 9 p.m.
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deliches
delicious
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we are stay
we stay / we are staying / we were staying
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how about to go
how about going
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on beach
on the beach / at the beach
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free in this day
free this day / free on (Saturday)
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(was) brock
(was) broken
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they looks like happy
they look happy
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we are go on a picnic
we go for a picnic
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was in box
was in a box / was in the box
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in one good day
one day
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to practice
to practise
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I am have some
I have some
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became skateboarding
began skateboarding
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near to my house
near my house / next to my house
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have a best day
have the best day
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gutar
guitar
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can to bring
can bring