What is tone?
The way that an author sounds
"Real Aussies would agree that..."
Appeal to Patriotism
"Eighty percent of people would argue that..."
Statistics
This is the what the author is responding to
The issue
A question that should require no answer.
Rhetorical Question
Pick the tone: "Wow our Government is useless"
Sarcastic, Annoyed, Frustrated
"The government needs to make the well-being of families a top priority the ensure parents have the time and resources to care for children so that they grow up feeling secure and loved"
Appeal to Family Values
"You can't teach an old dog new tricks"
Cliché
This is how the author feels
Contention
we need to act now!
Inclusive language
Pick the tone: "I cannot believe the injustice of the situation. We need to take action, immediately!"
Passionate, inspiring, aggressive, assertive
"This criminal would not have broken the law if he had been raised in a healthy, supportive family setting"
Appeal to family values
"love of money is a cancer that is eating away at our society" (3 techniques possible - you only need one)
Metaphor, inclusive language and appeal to fear
This is how the author sounds
Tone
"elderly and P-plate drivers are a menace on our roads"
Generalisation
Pick the tone: "If we all band together we can make a difference. We just need to start somewhere"
reasonable, optimistic, logical, earnest, confident
"spending taxpayers money on this issue..."
Appeal to the hip-pocket nerve
Provides the reader with a sense of belonging and a desire not to be "left out"
Inclusive language
These support the contention
Arguments
"If we don't have the resources to support an increased population, we can't sustain this level of immigration. It's that simple."
appeal to common sense
List at least 5 tone words starting with A (100 points per correct term - decided by me):
aggressive, assertive, arrogant, authoritative, accusing, antagonistic, amused, admonishing, animates, admiring, apathetic, awestruck
It's common sense that if you smack your children, they will stop the bad behavior. So don't tell me not to hit my kids
Appeal to common sense
"If you don't get me these, mum, I'll die!"
hyperbole
This is who the author wants is talking to
target audience
99% of people agree that English is the best subject
Statistics