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Although the argument is persuasive it lacks sufficient evidence
Although the argument is persuasive, it lacks sufficient evidence
The argument is detailed it lacks organization.
The argument is detailed, but it lacks organization.
The group of students __ presenting today.
When the author critiques the audience, the audience becomes defensive.
Due to the fact that the argument is persuasive many readers agree with it.
Because the argument is persuasive, many readers agree with it.
Students who revise carefully improve their essays however many skip the ending process.
Students who revise carefully improve their essays; however, many skip the ending process
The policy improved attendance many students still opposed it.
Although the policy improved attendance, many students still opposed it.
The results of the experiment ___ surprising.
were
If a student wants to improve their writing, you should revise consistently.
If students want to improve their writing, they should revise consistently.
The proposal has many benefits in a positive way for students.
The proposal provides many benefits for students.
The proposal while effective in theory creates practical challenges.
The proposal, while effective in theory, creates practical challenges.
The speech was emotional the audience remained unconvinced.
The speech was emotional; nevertheless, the audience remained unconvinced.
Each of the arguments ___ significant weaknesses.
have
The argument challenges the proposal because it lacks evidence.
The argument challenges the proposal because the proposal lacks evidence.
The author uses convincing evidence.
Because the author relies on emotional appeals readers may overlook flaws in the reasoning.
The author used statistics they are outdated and misleading.
Although the author used statistics, they are outdated and misleading.
The use of emotional appeals and statistics does what to the argument? (makes stronger)
strengthens
When readers analyze the article, it becomes more persuasive.
When readers analyze the article, the argument becomes more persuasive.
The speech was very emotional and caused people to feel lots of emotions.
The speech was highly emotional and deeply affected the audience.
The evidence appears convincing however it ultimately fails to support the authors claim.
The evidence appears convincing; however, it ultimately fails to support the author's claim.
The experiment produced measurable results the findings however were inconsistent.
The experiment produced measurable results; however, the findings were inconsistent.
Neither the evidence nor the claims does what to the conclusion? (upholds)
supports
The writer criticized the speaker because they ignored the audience.
The writer criticized the speaker because the speaker ignored the audience.
The argument is good but also has bad parts.