Task Completion
Language
Organization
Appropriacy
100

Introduction : Idea 1? Idea 2?

Idea 1: Welcome to the Hong Kong International Conference on Gender Discrimination

Idea 2: I'm Alice Wong, the conference coordinator

100

What are the key features of a semi-formal text?

1) Contractions

2) ? ! -

3) Imperatives

100

How many tasks are there in Task 9? How many paragraphs do we have to write?

2 Tasks + 4 Paragraphs (Introduction, Body Paragraphs 1-2, Conclusion)

100

What is the text type of Task 9 and what are the text type features?

A speech. To make it more like a speech, we need to include a greeting and a self-introduction in the introduction and thank the audience before ending the speech.

200

Body Paragraph 1: Idea 3? Idea 4?

Idea 3: 1893 - women in New Zealand were first in the world to win the right to vote

Idea 4: 1960 - Sirimavo Bandaranaike of Sri Lanka became the world's first female head of state

200

When a text is informative, we employ sentence patterns to connect the ideas in a better way. What sentence patterns can we use to express sequencing (i.e. ongoing actions happening at the same time/ actions happened one after another)?

1) Participle phrases (Listening to the teacher, I jotted down some notes.)

2) Inversions (Not only...but also...; No sooner had he read the book than he left a review on the website.)

200

What is the basic structure of a body paragraph?

4 (Introduction, Body Paragraphs 1-2, Conclusion)

200

What is the tone of this text type?

Semi-formal + Informative

300

Body Paragraph 1: Idea 5? Idea 6?

Idea 5: 1963 - Valentina Tereshkova first woman in space

Idea 6: 2010 - Kathryn Bigelow becomes the first woman to be awarded an Academy Award for Best Director

300

What sentence patterns can we use to express a cause-effect relationship?

1) Participle Phrase (Having read the book, I gained insights into the dire situation of gender inequality)

2) Prepositional Phrases (In view of/ In light of/ As such)

3) Conditionals (If)

400
Body Paragraph 2: 

Idea 7 - Who is Dr Lee? 

Idea 8 - What are her research interests?

Idea 7 - Dr Jennifer Lee, Sociology Department, Singapore University

Idea 8 - research interests include social structures in China and gender politics in international relations

400

What sentence patterns can we use to express a purpose?

Prepositional Phrases (In hopes of/ With a view to/ In a bid to)

500

Body Paragraph 2: 

Idea 9: Topic of her talk

Idea 10: Title of her talk

Idea 9: Women's rights in China

Idea 10: Tiger Girls and Superwomen

500

What sentence patterns can we use to describe people/ things?

Relative Clauses (Dr Lee is a professor whose research interests include...)

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