Identify the Modifier
Identify the Parallelism
Modifier or Parallelism
Correct the Modifiers
100

She has beautiful eyes.

beautiful

100

People often spend as much time worrying about the future as planning for it.

1. worrying about the future 2. planning for it Connecting word: as

100

He ran quickly

Modifier

100

Correct this sentence: The blue school's chairs are about to break.

"The school's blue chairs are about to break."

200

The fast car.

Fast

200

My new personal computer is both fast and reliable.

1. fast 2. reliable Connecting word: both, and

200

I saw, I came, I conquered

Parallelism

200

Correct this sentence: The broken man's television set was beyond repair.

"The man's broken television set was beyond repair."

300

The delicious pizza.

delicious
300

Ann is growing older but unfortunately not wiser.

1. older 2. not wiser Connecting word: but

300

The old house

Modifier

300

Correct this sentence: He let the hot cup of coffee cool on the table.

"He let the cup of hot coffee cool on the table."

400

He rode the green bike.

Green

400

If industrial nations continue to burn fossil fuels and if developing nations continue to burn their rain forests, the level of CO2 in the atmosphere will continue to increase.

1. If industrial nations continue to burn fossil fuels 2. If developing nations continue to burn their rain forests Connecting word: and

400

You can't judge a book by its cover

Parallelism

400

Correct this sentence: The man stood next to a tree talking on a cell phone.

"The man talking on a cell phone stood next to a tree."

500

The student carefully proofread her draft.

carefully

500

The criminal neither admitted guilt nor asked for forgiveness before he was executed.

1. admitted guilt 2. asked for forgiveness Connecting word: neither, nor

500

Fool me once, shame on you; fool me twice, shame on me

Paralleism

500

Correct this sentence: We had a big dinner after the show that was both delicious and filling.

"After the show, we had a big dinner that was both delicious and filling."

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