Revising and Editing
Correct any errors: “The students forgot they’re backpacks at home.”
they're > their
What is the purpose of an argumentative essay?
To convince the reader of a specific claim or position using evidence and reasoning
What is a theme?
A central idea or message the author conveys through the story
How many lines are in a sonnet?
14 lines
What are the key parts of an introduction paragraph?
Hook, background/context, and thesis statement
Identify the error: “Neither of the boys are ready for the trip.”
are > is
Which of these is a counterclaim?
A. Cellphones are essential in schools.
B. Some believe phones are a distraction.
B. Some believe phones are a distraction.
What method do we use to analyze indirect characterization? It's an acronym.
Speech
Thoughts
Effect on Others
Actions
Looks
What does "tone" mean in poetry?
The poet’s attitude toward the subject or audience
What should each body paragraph include?
A topic sentence, evidence, commentary, and a concluding sentence
Revise this vague sentence to make it more specific and clear: “She did something to fix it.”
Identify the rhetorical device: “If we don’t act now, we may lose our future!”
Pathos (emotional appeal)
“He clenched his fists and stared out the window, watching the rain blur the glass.”
What does this reveal about the character’s mood?
He is likely angry or frustrated.
Which is an example of personification?
A. “The wind whispered through the trees.”
B. “The sky was blue.”
A. - "whispered"
What is the role of commentary in an essay?
To explain how the evidence supports the claim and to add original insight.
Add an appropriate transition word or phrase to this sentence: “He studied all week. ________, he felt confident on test day.”
Therefore, As a Result, etc. (any transition using cause & effect.)
Which piece of evidence best supports the claim: “Social media can improve communication”?
A. Some people feel anxious online.
B. A 2023 Pew Research study found teens report stronger peer connections through social media.
B. A 2023 Pew Research study found teens report stronger peer connections through social media.
Rewrite this direct characterization as indirect: “Maria was kind and generous.”
An example of action, dialogue, or appearances showing Maria's kindness and generosity.
What does the speaker most likely feel in this stanza?
“I wandered, lonely as a cloud…”
The speaker feels isolated but contemplative or peaceful
Rewrite this vague thesis into a specific, argumentative claim: “Phones are bad for students.”
Include reasons why phones are bad.
Combine these two sentences into one clear and grammatically correct sentence: “She was tired. She finished the assignment anyway.”
"She was tired, but / yet she finished the assignment anyway."
Revise this thesis to be stronger:
Original: “I think school lunches are bad.”
Something along the lines with adding reason: “School lunches should be improved because they often lack nutrition, taste, and variety.”
How does setting influence character development in a dystopian story?
Harsh settings often force characters to adapt, rebel, or question societal norms, revealing their values and strengths
In a sonnet: How does the shift in the final couplet of a sonnet affect the meaning?
It often reveals a change in tone or offers a resolution or deeper insight.
Write a thesis for the following prompt:
“Write an essay explaining the importance of learning from failure.”
Something along the lines of: “Failure is essential for growth because it builds resilience, encourages reflection, and leads to long-term success.”