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Listing alllllllll the adjectives
Meet me @ 123 Comma Street on May 12
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Before we go to the movies I need to clean my room a little.

Before we go to the movies, I need to clean my room a little.

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Batman my favorite superhero is the theme for my birthday party this weekend.

Batman, my favorite superhero, is the theme for my birthday party this weekend. 

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Mark said "Do you know how to hit the griddy?"

Mark said, "Do you know how to hit the griddy?"

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You are so smart funny sweet and kind.

You are so smart, funny, sweet, and kind.

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My address is 126 Cherrytree Lane Tallahassee Florida.

My address is 126 Cherrytree Lane, Tallahassee, Florida.

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Ms. Mascaro can you please teach me how to dougie?

Ms. Mascaro, can you please teach me how to dougie?

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Julie Andrews one of the most famous film stars in history starred in The Sound of Music.

Julie Andrews, one of the most famous film stars in history, starred in The Sound of Music.

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"Maddie" said Anna "what time are you going to Sarah's house?"

"Maddie," said Anna, "what time are you going to Sarah's house?"

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My sweet thoughtful mom packed my lunch today.

My sweet, thoughtful mom packed my lunch today.

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I would love for you to come to the party I'm hosting on Friday June 15 at 1800 Cain Street Atlanta Georgia.

I would love for you to come to the party I'm hosting on Friday, June 15, at 1800 Cain Street, Atlanta, Georgia.

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Walking slowly the tourists followed the guide through the museum.

Walking slowly, the tourists followed the guide through the museum.

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The large red apple which was old and expired sat on my kitchen counter.

The large red apple, which was old and expired, sat on my kitchen counter.

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The text states "The rising number of stray pencils broken pens and torn paper on the floor will lead to decreased teacher happiness."

The text states, "The rising number of stray pencils, broken pens, and torn paper on the floor will lead to decreased teacher happiness."

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The delicious crunchy cookies were gone in five minutes flat.

The delicious, crunchy cookies were gone in five minutes flat.

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On Tuesday August 4 we will have a test on Units 1 2 3 and 4.

On Tuesday, August 4, we will have a test on Units 1, 2, 3, and 4.

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In the first paragraph the author uses many descriptive words to create a clear vivid image of the house by the sea.

In the first paragraph, the author uses many descriptive words to create a clear, vivid image of the house by the sea.

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The economy which is a top issue for many voters may decide this election but I am hopeful for the best outcome.

The economy, which is a top issue for many voters, may decide this election, but I am hopeful for the best outcome.

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Mr. Johnson said "I recognize you young man but I can't remember from where. Have we met before? You seem so familiar but I just can't place you."

Mr. Johnson said "I recognize you, young man, but I can't remember from where. Have we met before? You seem so familiar, but I just can't place you."

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Alex the young handsome athlete trained every day for six months in preparation for the upcoming race.

Alex, the young, handsome athlete, trained every day for six months in preparation for the upcoming race.

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Maya Angelou a renowned American poet was born in St. Louis Missouri in 1928.

Maya Angelou, a renowned American poet, was born in St. Louis, Missouri in 1928.

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I am really trying to work this out Ron but your loud obnoxious talking is making it hard to concentrate. 

I am really trying to work this out, Ron, but your loud, obnoxious talking is making it hard to concentrate.

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The coach who won three state championships in 20 years will retire after the season ends but his fans don't want him to leave just yet.

The coach, who won three state championships in 20 years, will retire after the season ends, but his fans don't want him to leave just yet.

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"How could you do this to me? Despite all the years memories and laughs we've shared you've broken my heart!" she cried "John we're through!"

"How could you do this to me? Despite all the years, memories, and laughs we've shared, you've broken my heart!" she cried, "John, we're through!"

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The king gave a beautiful inspirational speech about charities that help the poor sick and hungry.

The king gave a beautiful inspirational speech about charities that help the poor sick and hungry.

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I live on 4567 Heart Street Jacksonville Florida but I used to live on 1567 Toontown Road Tallahasse Florida.

I live on 4567 Heart Street, Jacksonville, Florida, but I used to live on 1567 Toontown Road, Tallahasse, Florida.

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