SAD Openers
Dialogue Punctuation
Figurative Language
Brushstrokes
100

In a deep, dark forest in a distant kingdom there was a mansion house built of warm red stone. within its walls lived a beautiful young girl, her name was...Cinderella.

Setting

100

"When do we have the test? asked Clang.

"When do we have the test?" asked Clang.

100

My mom warned me not to spill the beans about the surprise party.

Idiom

100

The track, slippery and wet, made it tough to run the race.

Adjectives out of order

200

BANG! a plate hit the wall, CRASH! a glass shattered on the floor. Cinderella sat on the stairs and sighed... her sisters were fighting again.

Action

200

"Are we going to the park asked Mr. Holmquist?"

"Are we going to the park?" asked Mr. Holmquist.

200

The cat clawed continuously at the door.

Alliteration

200

Heads nodding, everyone was in agreement over the answer.

Absolute

300

"CINDERELLA!" yelled her stepmother. "Get down here this instant-silly girl!" Cinderella sighed and wondered what they wanted this time.

Dialogue

300

"Are you working?" asked Ms. Rainwater

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300

When he talked, his words were like the roar of a lion.

Simile

300

My favorite building, the Chrysler Building, is in New York city.

Appositive

400

Rushing through the autumn leaves, the black cat bounded away through the grassy backyard from the snarling Chihuahua.

Setting

400

"Is it time to leave yet asked Kumar

"Is it time to leave yet?" asked Kumar.

400

This song lasts forever.

Hyperbole

400

I scribbled some notes down on the paper and turned in the essay. 

Vivid Verbs

500

Face sweating, legs pumping, the boys sailed through the crowd of runners and streaked across the rain-soaked finish line.

Action

500

Why is this taking so long asked Joshua."

"Why is this taking so long?" asked Joshua.

500

The lobster danced around the tank not trying to get caught.

Personification

500

His apartment, cramped and messy, needed to be cleaned.

Adjectives Out of Order

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