SAD openers
sand so golden leaves fell, water swooshed as you could take the beach smell.
setting
my backpack feels like a million pounds.
hyperbole
"hey want to get food?"
"Hey, want to get food?"
as white as snow
simlile
"Did you know we had a test suzie"?
"Did you know we had a test Suzie?"
BANG!
onomatopoeia
Suzie sold sea shells by the sea shore
alliteration
you are a shinning star
Metaphore