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100

Researchers interviewed 30 students.

30 students were interviewed.

100

The students was interviewed.

The students were interviewed.

100

Researchers / interview / 40 students

Create a complete sentence in passive voice.


Forty students were interviewed by researchers.


100

Researchers interviewed 50 students.

The researchers

100

Transform:

Teachers use technology in English classes.

Technology is used in English classes.

200

The researchers collected the data through a questionnaire.

The data were collected through a questionnaire.

200

The questionnaire were completed online.

The questionnaire was completed online.

200

Researchers / collect / data / through a questionnaire

Create an academic sentence in passive voice without mentioning the researchers.

The data were collected through a questionnaire.

200

Fifty students were interviewed.

The students / participants

200

Which is better for an academic text?

A. Students use social media every day.

B. Social media is used by students every day.

B, if the focus is on the use of social media.

300

Students completed the questionnaire online.

The questionnaire was completed online. - The questionnaire was completed online by students.

300

The data were collect through interviews.

The data were collected through interviews.

300

Researchers conducted interviews.

Researchers analyzed the responses.


Create ONE academic sentence using passive voice.

Interviews were conducted, and the responses were analyzed.

300

A. Researchers collected the data.

B. The data were collected.

A focuses on the researchers.

B focuses on the data.

300

Transform this into a more academic sentence:

People speak different languages in multicultural communities.

Different languages are spoken in multicultural communities.

400

Researchers analyzed the students' responses.

The students' responses were analyzed.

400

Several communication problems were identify.

Several communication problems were identified.

400

Researchers surveyed 80 students.

They collected the students' opinions.

They analyzed the results.


Create one academic sentence using at least two passive structures.

Eighty students were surveyed, their opinions were collected, and the results were analyzed.

400

You are writing an abstract about the results of a survey.

Which sentence better focuses on the research evidence?

A. We collected information from 100 students.

B. Information was collected from 100 students.

B. Information was collected from 100 students.

400

You are writing about an investigation.

Original:

We interviewed students and we found communication problems.

Create a more academic version.

Students were interviewed, and several communication problems were identified.

500

Researchers conducted interviews and analyzed the results.

Interviews were conducted and the results were analyzed.

500

The students was asked several questions, and their responses were analyze.

The students were asked several questions, and their responses were analyzed.

500

Create an academic sentence about a study on intercultural communication.


Your sentence must:


use passive voice

include a plural subject

use a past participle

mention a research action

contain at least 8 words

Several cultural differences were identified during the interviews.

500

You are writing the Findings section of an abstract.

Which sentence is better?

A. Researchers found that students had difficulty understanding cultural differences.

B. Difficulties in understanding cultural differences were identified among students.

B. Difficulties in understanding cultural differences were identified among students.

500

Researchers interviewed 60 students about intercultural communication. They analyzed the students' responses and identified several communication problems.

Sixty students were interviewed about intercultural communication. The students' responses were analyzed, and several communication problems were identified.

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