What does it mean to revise?
Re-examine, look with new eyes, make changes with a purpose...
What can you revise at the beginning of your story to better capture the reader's attention?
Hook/Exposition
What is the central focus of the plot structure?
The climax/central conflict
What can you include in a revision that would give direct quotes from the people speaking in your story?
Dialogue
What is the beginning of the plot arc, where you learn about the setting and characters involved?
Exposition/Introduction
What revision can be made to the following paragraph?
I love Harry Potter. I started reading the books in middle school. I really like the fantasy genre.
Varied sentence opening, remove the "I" at the beginning of every sentence
What is the last piece of the plot arc, where we learn how everyone feels about what happened in the story?
The resolution
What does it mean to revise the 'mechanics' of your narrative?
spelling, grammer, punctuation, language use, etc
What is the purpose of a semicolon?
It joins two complete sentences together; two independent clauses that could stand alone come together.
The birds outside my window woke me up with their constant tweet! tweet! tweet!
onomatopoeia