What is the biggest problem in the student's use of the following passage?
Original: There is a bizarre irony at work here. Both the right and left are convinced ObamaCare will eventually become popular if implemented. Conservatives fear the "ratchet effect," a term coined by the great libertarian economic historian Robert Higgs. Once government expands, goes the theory, reversing that expansion is nearly impossible. Liberals have their own version. They point out that once Americans get an entitlement — Social Security, Medicare, etc. — they never want to lose it. They hope that if they can just get Americans hooked on the goodies in ObamaCare, they'll overlook all the flaws.
Goldberg, J. (2013, August 5). Excuse me? GOP to blame for ObamaCare?. USA Today. Retrieved from
http://www.usatoday.com/story/opinion/2013/08/05/obamacare-affordable-care-act-gop-column/2620861/
Student version: Ironically, both the left and right think Obamacare will become popular once it goes into effect (Goldberg, 2013). Conservatives believe that reversing expansion is very difficult (Goldberg, 2013). Liberals believe that Americans never want to lose their entitlements and hope that Americans will overlook Obamacare’s flaws once they get hooked on its benefits (Goldberg, 2013).
Reference
Goldberg, J. (2013, August 5). Excuse me? GOP to blame for ObamaCare?.
USA Today. Retrieved from
http://www.usatoday.com/story/opinion/2013/08/05/obamacare-affordable-care-act-gop-column/2620861/
The wording is too close to the original (patchwriting).