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If you can’t fix something, then you should try and help, Which is what dr. Strauss and nemur should’ve done in “Flowers for algernon.”
If you can’t fix something, then you should try and help, which is what Dr. Strauss and Nemur should’ve done in “Flowers for Algernon.”
When citing evidence, what are the three things you need to include? (Can put them in order if you remember...)
1. Lead
2. Quote/Paraphrase
3. Citation w/ Author & Page #
Later after Charlie’s surgery and the experiences that followed Charlie’s intelligence began to decline.
Later, after Charlie’s surgery and the experiences that followed, Charlie’s intelligence began to decline.
OR
After Charlie’s surgery and the experiences that followed, Charlie’s intelligence began to decline.
In Flowers for Algernon, Charlie is given a chance to undergo an operation that increases his intelligence greatly (Keyes, pg 285).
In "Flowers for Algernon," Charlie is given a chance to undergo an operation that increases his intelligence greatly (Keyes, pg 285).
Charlie is so excited to have the operation done because the Doctors are giving him the opportunity of his life time.
Charlie is so excited to have the operation done because the doctors are giving him the opportunity of his life time.
In the text Charlie says “I don't know why I never noticed how beautiful Miss Kinnian really is.” (Keyes, pg. 295)
In the text, Charlie says, “I don't know why I never noticed how beautiful Miss Kinnian really is” ( Keyes, pg. 295).
This proves that once Radio was more exposed and was recognized by the public he seemed to be accepted by most in the town.
This proves that once Radio was more exposed and was recognized by the public, he seemed to be accepted by most in the town.
This kindness was also shown in the Movie “Radio” with many comparable instances.
This kindness was also shown in the movie Radio with many comparable instances.
this quote explains how Joe and Frank used Charlie to make fun of him.
This quote explains how Joe and Frank used Charlie to make fun of him.
in “Flowers for Algernon”,“Dr Nemur said he will be the first human to triple intelligence by surgical means” (Keyes Pg. 287)
In “Flowers for Algernon," Charlie writes, “Dr Nemur said he will be the first human to triple intelligence by surgical means” (Keyes Pg. 287).
In “Flowers for Algernon," it is written, “Dr Nemur said he will be the first human to triple intelligence by surgical means” (Keyes Pg. 287).
A little bit later on Coach Jones finally tells his daughter Mary Ellen the reason behind him befriending Radio
A little bit later on, Coach Jones finally tells his daughter Mary Ellen the reason behind him befriending Radio.
In “Radio,” Radio speaks to many people over the course of the movie
In Radio, Radio speaks to many people over the course of the movie.
In the End, he left new york a new person with new wisdom and happiness.
In the end, he left New York a new person with new wisdom and happiness.
Another quote from “Flowers For Algernon” is “I have often reread my progress reports and seen the illiteracy..."
Another quote from “Flowers For Algernon” is, “I have often reread my progress reports and seen the illiteracy..." (Keyes, pg. #).
DOUBLE POINTS:
In “Flowers For Algernon” Charlie writes, “I have often reread my progress reports and seen the illiteracy..." (Keyes, pg. #).
Also since people are expected to be smart it can make those with lower intelligence be outcast from the start.
Also, since people are expected to be smart, it can make those with lower intelligence be outcast from the start.
Rewrite the lead & correct the citation in the following sentence:
An excerpt from Flowers for Algernon, pg. 297 “Before, they laughed at me and despised me for my ignorance and dullness.." shows this.
This is shown in "Flowers for Algernon" on pg. 297 when Charlie writes, “Before, they laughed at me and despised me for my ignorance and dullness.." shows this (Keyes).
OR
This is shown in "Flowers for Algernon" when Charlie writes, “Before, they laughed at me and despised me for my ignorance and dullness.." shows this (Keyes, pg. 297).