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It is hard to believe that chickens can live without a head but one robust fellow lived a full eighteen months.
What is It is hard to believe that chickens can live without a head, but one robust fellow lived a full eighteen months.
100
To purchase her items the young woman traveled over a bridge through a desert and across the plains.
What is To purchase her items the young woman traveled over a bridge, through a desert, and across the plains.
100
Your cousin has an easy happy smile.
What is Your cousin has an easy, happy smile.
100
The bluefish weighed about twelve pounds give or take a few ounces.
What is The bluefish weighed about twelve pounds, give or take a few ounces.
100
Anna Spingle married at the age of seventeen had three children by twenty-one and divorced at twenty-two.
What is Anna Spingle married at the age of seventeen had three children by twenty-one, and divorced at twenty-two.
200
They say that lightning never strikes the same place twice but The Empire State Building is struck about 25 times every year.
What is They say that lightning never strikes the same place twice, but The Empire State Building is struck about 25 times every year.
200
The fresh bread was at the bakery the red wine was at the winery the fish was at the open market and the salt was at the corner grocery.
What The fresh bread was at the bakery, the red wine was at the winery, the fish was at the open market, and the salt was at the corner grocery.
200
One of the best ways of identifying oneself as an upper class man was by wearing a clean starched white collar.
What is One of the best ways of identifying oneself as an upper class man was by wearing a clean, starched white collar.
200
Drivers who think they own the road make cycling a dangerous sport.
What is Drivers, who think they own the road, make cycling a dangerous sport.
200
Yesterday was her brother's birthday so she took him out to dinner.
What is Yesterday was her brother's birthday, so she took him out to dinner.
300
It is believed that reading in dim light ruins your eyesight, but the researchers found that it can only cause eye strain and temporarily decreased acuity, it subsides after rest.
What is It is believed that reading in dim light ruins your eyesight, but the researchers found that it can only cause eye strain and temporarily decreased acuity; it subsides after rest.
300
The custody involved Amy Dalton the child Ellen and Mark Dalton the parents and Ruth and Hal Blum the grandparents.
The custody involved Amy Dalton, the child; Ellen and Mark Dalton, the parents; and Ruth and Hal Blum, the grandparents.
300
In the early 1800's it was not uncommon to have three generations of women sewing, starching, and ironing shirt collars in the same crowded open-air factory.
What is In the early 1800's it was not uncommon to have three generations of women sewing, starching, and ironing shirt collars in the same crowded, open-air factory.
300
Scientists believe that the best odds of finding life outside our solar system are on Earth-sized planets particularly those with the right temperature density and chemistry.
What is Scientists believe that the best odds of finding life outside our solar system are on Earth-sized planets , particularly those with the right temperature, density and chemistry.
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A recent study carried out at the University at Buffalo suggests that drinking wine particularly white wine may help keep lungs healthy. The study found no association between lung function and total amount of alcohol consume nor between lung health and alcohol from beer wine coolers or liquor.
What is A recent study carried out at the University at Buffalo suggests that drinking wine, particularly white wine, may help keep lungs healthy. The study found no association between lung function and total amount of alcohol consumed, nor between lung health and alcohol from beer, wine coolers or liquor.
400
There is a myth that penny dropped from the top of a tall building could kill a pedestrian but it would travel fast enough merely to sting an unlucky person.
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400
The guests present included Joan Stevens a doctor Rob Gray a dentist and Marsha Todd a senator.
The guests present included: Joan Stevens, a doctor; Rob Gray, a dentist; and Marsha Todd, a senator.
400
The modern class-consciousness creates an intricate elusive interplay between fashion and social status.
What is The modern class-consciousness creates an intricate, elusive interplay between fashion and social status.
400
The city's first reclamation plant initially capable of producing only 460 million gallons of clean water per year when it went on line in 1968 is now pumping out double that amount enough to provide about 23 percent of the city's yearly water demands. Officials hope to boost that supply number to 51 percent with an upcoming facility now under construction.
What is The city's first reclamation plant, initially capable of producing only 460 million gallons of clean water per year when it went on line in 1968, is now pumping out double that amount, enough to provide about 23 percent of the city's yearly water demands. Officials hope to boost that supply number to 51 percent with an upcoming facility now under construction.
400
This restaurant has an exciting atmosphere. The food on the other hand is rather bland.
What is This restaurant has an exciting atmosphere. The food, on the other hand, is rather bland.
500
There is a believe that humans use only 10 percent of brains, but imaging studies show no dormant areas of the brain and even viewing individual neurons or cells reveals no inactive areas, the new paper points out.
What is There is a believe that humans use only 10 percent of brains, but imaging studies show no dormant areas of the brain, and even viewing individual neurons or cells reveals no inactive areas, the new paper points out.
500
The following crewmembers were on the bridge James T. Kirk captain of the Enterprise Mr. Spock first science officer Mr. Sulu helmsman Mr. Scott engineer and Dr. McCoy chief medical officer.
The following crewmembers were on the bridge: James T. Kirk, captain of the Enterprise; Mr. Spock, first science officer; Mr. Sulu, helmsman; Mr. Scott, engineer; and Dr. McCoy, chief medical officer.
500
Throughout history clothing has been extremely important in mediating a strange depersonalized world.
What is Throughout history clothing has been extremely important in mediating a strange, depersonalized world.
500
“This finding may indicate that nutrients in wine are responsible for the positive effect of alcoholic beverages on lung function" said James.
What is “This finding may indicate that nutrients in wine are responsible for the positive effect of alcoholic beverages on lung function," said James.
500
The isolated regional shirt-collar industries eventually eased themselves into a national flow of American business by consolidating their manufacturing production and distribution claims. (2 parts)
What is The isolated regional shirt-collar industries eventually eased themselves into a national flow of American business by consolidating their manufacturing, production, and distribution claims. commas needed for items in a series but not for coordinate adjectives.
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