"Fix Me" Uppers
Where in the world is "Comma" San Diego?
Series-ously?
What's wrong with this?
Apostrophes
100
This book is her's, not your's.
What is: This book is hers, not yours.
100
The girl left home and she forgot her keys.
What is: The girl left home, and she forgot her keys
100
The shoes shirt pants and belt are in my car.
What is: The shoes, shirt, pants, and belt are in my car.
100

The tent chairs and food are packed in the car.

The tent, chairs, and food are packed in the car. (commas)

100
Its a great day to be alive.
What is: It's a great day to be alive.
200
Most of the events at the car show were fun, but Alfreds events were somewhat boring.
What is: Most of the events at the car show were fun, but Alfred's events were boring.
200
The boys ran hard yet they lost.
What is: The boys ran hard, yet they lost.
200
There are dogs, cats and goats roaming the farm.
What is: There are dogs, cats, and goats roaming the farm.
200

The brother and sister are friends, they like to play outside together.

The brother and sister are friends, AND they like to play outside together.  (comma splice)

200
Ms. Changs hat is not ready for pick-up.
What is: Ms. Chang's hat is not ready for pick up.
300
It's campus is beautiful, and its quiet there.
What is: Its campus is beautiful, and it's quiet there.
300
The mother could not find her child so she called the police.
What is: The mother could not find her child, so she called the police.
300
Cher went to the show avoided the press and sang her heart out.
What is: Cher went to the show, avoided the press, and sang her heart out.
300

The book was hard to read its diction was strange.

The book was hard to read as its diction was strange. (fanboy)

300
The Taylors dog barks non-stop.
What is The Taylors' dog barks non-stop. OR The Taylors's dog barks non-stop.
400
Most of the girls displays were organized, but Tess display was a mess.
What is: Most of the girls' displays were organized, but Tess's display was a mess. Or Most of the girls' displays were organized, but Tess' was a mess.
400
When she went to the liquor store she realized that she forgot her I.D.
What is: When she went to the liquor store, she realized that she forgot her I.D.
400
Her driving was horrendous, her signaling was terrible and she almost killed us three times.
What is: Her driving was horrendous, her signaling was terrible, and she almost killed us three times.
400

Buried under the ground.

fragmented sentence

400
Shes her own worst enemy, and her problems dont help her case.
What is: She's her own worst enemy, and her problems don't help her case.
500
The mother searched high and low, and looked hard for the toys.
What is: The mother searched high and low and looked hard for the toys. OR The mother searched high and low; she looked hard for the toys. OR The mother searched high and low, and(cc) she looked hard for the toys. OR The mother searched high and low. She looked hard for the toys.
500
When the boys left home. She snuck into their room.
What is: When the boys left home, she snuck into their room. OR She snuck into their room when they boys left home.
500
She walked outside and fed the birds birdseed watched them gobble it down and noticed how they took it back to their nests when they were finished.
What is: She walked outside and fed the birds birdseed, watched them gobble it down, and noticed how they took it back to their nests when they were finished.
500

When the boy road his bike, he felt excited. 

spelling error - rode.

500
That is my sister's and my's favorite song.
What is: That is my and my sister's favorite song.
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