Commas/Semicolons
Eliminating Redundancy
Logical Transitions / Logical Links
Verb Tense Consistency/7. Pronoun Clarity & Agreement
ACT Mixed Style
100

1. After finishing the assignment the students turned it in.
A) NO CHANGE
B) assignment, the
C) assignment; the
D) assignment: the

B) assignment, the

100

10. The reason why she left was because she was tired.
A) NO CHANGE
B) The reason why she left was she was tired.
C) She left because she was tired.
D) Because she was tired is why she left.

C) She left because she was tired.

100

13. She studied for hours. _______, she failed the test.
A) Therefore
B) However
C) For example
D) Similarly

B) However

100

In the novel, the protagonist struggled with isolation and ultimately discovers the value of friendship.

A) NO CHANGE
B) struggles
C) struggled
D) is struggling

B) struggles

100

23. Maria and her friend goes to the gym every day.
A) NO CHANGE
B) go
C) going
D) gone

B) go

200

2. My sister who lives in Dallas is visiting next week.
A) NO CHANGE
B) sister, who lives in Dallas is
C) sister who lives in Dallas, is
D) sister, who lives in Dallas, is

D) sister, who lives in Dallas, is

200

Due to the fact that the meeting was postponed, it was rescheduled for a later time.

A) NO CHANGE
B) Because the meeting was postponed, it was rescheduled later.
C) The meeting was postponed due to the fact it was rescheduled.
D) Since the meeting was postponed, it was postponed for later.

B) Because the meeting was postponed, it was rescheduled later.

200

The team trained intensely for months. _______, they did not win the championship.

A) Consequently
B) Similarly
C) However
D) For example

A) However

200

17. The novel describes a hero who fought for justice and protects the weak.
A) NO CHANGE
B) fights
C) fighting
D) will fight

B) fights

200

25. After reviewing the data; the scientist published her findings.
A) NO CHANGE
B) data,
C) data
D) data:

B) data,

300

The weather was cold, we decided to stay inside.

A) NO CHANGE
B) cold; we
C) cold and we
D) cold: we

B) cold; we

300

12. The final outcome was completely finished.
A) NO CHANGE
B) final outcome was finished
C) outcome was completely finished
D) outcome was finished

D) outcome was finished

300

The experiment appeared successful. _______, further analysis revealed significant errors in the data.

A) Therefore
B) In addition
C) However
D) For example

C) However

300

Each of the participants must submit their application by Friday.

A) NO CHANGE
B) his or her
C) its
D) our

B) his or her


“Each” is singular → pronoun must be singular.

300

The group of volunteers, including the team leaders, are organizing the event.

A) NO CHANGE
B) is
C) were
D) have been

B) is

400

4. I wanted to go to the concert; but I didn’t buy a ticket.
A) NO CHANGE
B) concert, but
C) concert but
D) concert: but

B) concert, but

400

1. The unexpected surprise shocked everyone in the room.
A) NO CHANGE
B) unexpected surprise shocked everyone
C) surprise shocked everyone
D) completely unexpected surprise shocked everyone

C) surprise shocked everyone

400

3. The instructions were confusing. _______, many students asked for clarification.
A) For example
B) As a result
C) Meanwhile
D) Instead

B) As a result

400

19. When Sarah met with Emily, she was nervous.
A) NO CHANGE
B) Sarah was nervous.
C) Emily were nervous.
D) They was nervous.

B) Sarah was nervous.

400

The lecture was long, many students struggled to stay focused.

A) NO CHANGE
B) long; many
C) long and many
D) long: many

B) long; many


Two complete sentences → need semicolon.

500

5. She loves reading; her brother prefers sports.
A) NO CHANGE
B) reading, her
C) reading: her
D) reading and her

A) NO CHANGE

500

2. She repeated the same mistake again.
A) NO CHANGE
B) repeated the same mistake
C) repeated the mistake again
D) repeated the mistake

D) repeated the mistake

500

4. The company lowered its prices. _______, sales increased dramatically.
A) However
B) For instance
C) Consequently
D) Likewise

C) Consequently

500

When Jason spoke to Marcus, he seemed frustrated.

A) NO CHANGE
B) Jason seemed frustrated.
C) Marcus seemed frustrated.
D) They seemed frustrated.

B) Jason seemed frustrated.

500

He had many goals: he wanted to graduate early.

A) NO CHANGE
B) goals; he wanted
C) goals, he wanted
D) goals and he wanted

B) goals; he wanted


A colon must follow a complete sentence AND introduce explanation.
“Many goals” isn’t specific enough — semicolon works better between two complete sentences.

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