rupod
proud
leave
left
Please RETURN my money when you can.
give back
Dave, 9, sister, fake, cross, play a prank, scared, feel bad
5 sentences
On the other side of the river, a woman trying to get the bag with her umbrella.
not "trying" but "was trying"
iosxnua
anxious
begin
began
I RESPECT my older sister
look up to
Ashlyn Blocker, 13, engine, confused, trip and injure, genetic disorder, cure
5 sentences
While Tom saw the woman was having trouble, he decided to help her.
Not "While" but "When"
heletdgdi
delighted
pay
paid
It took her ages to RECOVER FROM it becuase she was so shocked.
get over
Michael Carrol, 19, 9.7, thousands, 2010, refuse collector, Sandra
So he took off his shoes, did climbed into the river and swam across to the bag.
not "did climbed" but "climbed"
everiedl
relieved
bleed
bled
I won't TOLERATE your rudeness any longer.
put up with
Zoe Lemon, 10, 1990, 23, the Netherland, moving, five-year-old
5 sentences
Then she take out a ten pound note and folded it so that it looked like a boat.
not "take" but "took"
psiisucosu
suspicious
hurt
hurt
Everybode looked at me so I had to CONFESS.
own up
Tanya, Thailand, Roberta Manchino, BASE jumping, venue, afraid, adrenaline junkie
5 sentences
As he thought what to do he heard a screm.
not "thought" but "was thinking"