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rewrite sentence (12)The excited children wait excitedly for Soriano to come. A The children wait excitedly for Soriano to come. B The children wait excitedly. For Soriano to come. C The children are excited, they wait excitedly for Soriano to come. D The children who are excited wait excitedly for Soriano to come.
What is A The children wait excitedly for Soriano to come.
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(13) For the fourth-grade class hike, a lot of kids wore new hiking shoes, they were sturdy. 9 What is the correct way to write sentence 13? A For the fourth-grade class hike, there were a lot of kids they wore new hiking shoes that were sturdy. B For the fourth-grade class hike. A lot of kids wore new hiking shoes, and they were sturdy. C For the fourth-grade class hike, a lot of kids wore new hiking shoes. That were sturdy. D For the fourth-grade class hike, a lot of kids wore sturdy, new hiking shoes.
What is D For the fourth-grade class hike, a lot of kids wore sturdy, new hiking shoes.
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At lunch I want to spend time with my friends. We talk.
What is At lunch I want to spend time with my friends, we talk.
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“Their not here because they forgot about the meeting” she said.
What is "They're not here because they forgot about the meeting", she said.
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Combine: There are people selling Irish crafts. There are others cooking Irish food. some are playing Irish games.
What is There are people selling Irish crafts, cooking Irish food, and playing Irish games.
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(6) Two donkeys are used instead. ((7) The biblioburro is what it is. Which of the following could BEST replace sentence 7? F The biblioburro is that. G This unique bookmobile is called the biblioburro. H The donkeys are in the biblioburro. J It is a biblioburro bookmobile with donkeys and books, too.
What is G This unique bookmobile is called the biblioburro.
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(34) I would try my hardest to gather plenty of food, I wanted to become the very best worker ant our colony has ever had! 8 What is the correct way to write sentence 34? F I would try my hardest to gather plenty of food because I wanted to become the very best worker ant. That our colony has ever had! G I would try my hardest to gather plenty of food because I wanted to become. The very best worker ant our colony has ever had! H I would try my hardest to gather plenty of food. Wanting to become the very best worker ant our colony has ever had! J I would try my hardest to gather plenty of food. I wanted to become the very best worker ant our colony has ever had!
What is J I would try my hardest to gather plenty of food. I wanted to become the very best worker ant our colony has ever had!
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Combine: Caitlyn wants to be a lawyer. Samantha plans on being a TV star.
What is Caitlyn wants to be a lawyer, but Samantha plans to be a TV star.
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Comparative-superlative : Anna was clearly the___ of the two kittens.(curious)
What is more curious
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(11) Today Ghetti uses only three tools to create his sculptures: a razor blade, a sewing needle, and a sculpting knife. (12) He now lives in Bridgeport, Connecticut. (13) Among Ghetti’s many creations are a tiny chair, a shoe, a mailbox, and a church. (14) He has even carved a miniature Elvis Presley into the tip of a pencil. (15) Most sculptures take several months for Ghetti to create. (16) However, some projects take longer. (17) Ghetti once carved a pencil into a series of 23 interlocking chain links. (18) That project took two and a half years! Which sentence doesn't belong: 12- 13-14-17?
What is A Sentence 12
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(35) Each of these young people saw a need, and instead of waiting for an adult to address it, they jumped in and filled the need themselfs. 18 What change needs to be made in sentence 35? F Change saw to seen G Change instead of to instead off H Change address it to address them J Change themselfs to themselves
What is J Change themselfs to themselves
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16) I felt as though I could do anything. (17) And was even thinking about running up the next stalk of grass. 25 What is the correct way to write sentence 17? A And was even thinking about running. Up the next stalk of grass. B I was even thinking about running up the next stalk of grass. C I was even thinking about running, I would go up the next stalk of grass. D Sentence 17 is written correctly in the story.
What is B I was even thinking about running up the next stalk of grass.
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Combine: Because John wants to win all his wrestling matches. He works hard to stay in shape.
What is Because John wants to win all his wrestling matches, he works hard to stay in shape.
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Fix: Otherwise, the pancakes would stick to the surface, we would have a big mess to clean up then.
What is Otherwise, the pancakes would stick to the surface, and we would have a big mess to clean up.
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(34) He turned his golden eyes toward me. (35) He almost looked embarrassed. What is the BEST way to combine sentences 34 and 35? F He turned and his golden eyes toward me almost looked embarrassed. G When he turned his golden eyes toward me, he almost looked embarrassed. H Turning his golden eyes toward me, which almost looked embarrassed. J He turned his golden eyes toward me, he almost looked embarrassed.
What is G When he turned his golden eyes toward me, he almost looked embarrassed.
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(22) “If your young and think you can’t make a big difference in the world, well, you actually can.” 16 What change needs to be made in sentence 22? F Change your to you’re G Change the period to a comma H Delete the quotation marks at the end of the sentence J No change needs to be made in sentence 22
What is F Change your to you’re
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(13) If we had a rock-climbing wall on our playground. (14) It could also be used for PE classes. What is the correct way to write sentences 13 and 14? F If we had a rock-climbing wall on our playground, it could also be used for PE classes. G We could have a rock-climbing wall on our playground. Which could also be used for PE classes. H We could have a rock-climbing wall on our playground, it could also be used for PE classes. J The sentences are written correctly in the paper
What is F If we had a rock-climbing wall on our playground, it could also be used for PE classes.
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Combine: Tim likes to make people laugh. Jason likes to make people laugh.
What is Tim and Jason like to make people laugh.
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combine: The wind blows. Then the turbines spin. This generates electricity.
What is When the wind blows, the turbines spin, and generates electricity.
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Fix: My father was very clear about how long to wait. (25) Before trying to flip the pancakes over.
What is My father was very clear about how long to wait before trying to flip the pancakes over.
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(17) All the attention prompted Blare to create an organization. (18) Called Blare’s Bears for Haiti. 15 What is the correct way to write sentences 17 and 18? A All the attention prompted Blare to create an organization. Which he called Blare’s Bears for Haiti. B All the attention prompting Blare to create an organization called Blare’s Bears for Haiti. C All the attention prompted Blare to create an organization, it was called Blare’s Bears for Haiti. D All the attention prompted Blare to create an organization called Blare’s Bears for Haiti.
What is D All the attention prompted Blare to create an organization called Blare’s Bears for Haiti.
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Combine: (8) Other boy’s and girl’s are so eager for a challenge that they end up breaking rules by climbing on restricted parts of the jungle gyms, such as the roofs and slide covers. 19 What change needs to be made in sentence 8? A Change boy’s and girl’s to boys and girls B Change are so eager to is so eager C Change they end up to you end up D Change by climbing on to they climb on
What is A Change boy’s and girl’s to boys and girls
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In 1979 geologists began recording earthquakes around a volcano in washington’s cascade mountains.
What is comma - Change Washington’s Cascade Mountains
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2) I look forward to the recess bell like everyone else, but every time I go Outside, I think about how recess could be even better.
What is B Change Outside to outside
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Combine: (6) Ghetti learned how to carve his friends’ names into pencils. (7) He would then give the pencils to his friends as gifts. A Ghetti learned how to carve his friends’ names into pencils, which he would then give to his friends as gifts. B Ghetti learned how to carve his friends’ names into pencils, he would then give the pencils to his friends as gifts. C Ghetti learned how to carve his friends’ names into pencils after he would give the pencils to his friends as gifts. D Ghetti learned how to carve his friends’ names into pencils that would then give the pencils to his friends as gifts.
What is A-Ghetti learned how to carve his friends’ names into pencils, which he would then give to his friends as gifts.
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