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100
The joey stays in the pouch to drink its mother's milk, but it also starts to learn about the outside World.
What is world?
100
The joey still pokes its head back in when it wants milk, but their isn't much room anymore.
What is there?
100
As soon as a joey is born, it climbs into its mother's pouch?
What is change the question mark to a period
100
During this time the joey's eyes open. During this time it grows hair.
What is During this time the joey's eyes open and it grows hair.
100
In the pouch the joey finds the ends of special tubes these tubes contain milk.
What is In the pouch the joey finds the ends of special tubes. These tubes contain milk. or What is In the pouch the joey finds the ends of special tubes which contain milk.
200
"Churk-churk-churk!" i cry in a high-pitched tone.
What is I?
200
The predator is to big to fit in the burrows.
What is too?
200
Slavery was practiced in some states in Tubmans time.
What is change change Tubmans to Tubman's
200
The prairie dog's stomach feels empty. It goes off in search of roots and insects.
What is The prairie dog's stomach feels empty, so it goes off in search of roots and insects or What is Because the prairie dog's stomach feels empty, it goes off in search of roots and insects.
200
Slowly, it peeks out from the mound it is searching for signs of a hawk.
What is Slowly, it peeks out from the mound. It is searching for signs of a hawk. or Slowly, it peeks out from the mound searching for signs of a hawk.
300
Tales of a Fourth grade Nothing is a book about a fourth grader named Peter Hatcher.
What is grade?
300
Peter feels that he gets blammed for the mischief Fudge creates.
What is blamed?
300
Peter is still upset so his father decides to buy him a new pet.
What is add a comma before so
300
I liked Tales of a Fourth Grade Nothing. It was about an ordinary kid like me.
What is I liked Tales of a Fourth Grade Nothing because it was about an ordinary kid like me.
300
The things that happened to Peter and his brother were so funny they made me realize my brother is pretty funny too.
What is The things that happened to Peter and his brother were so funny, they made me realize my brother is pretty funny too.
400
A Hedgehog is a small mammal.
What is hedgehog?
400
Petting a hedgehog might fell a little like petting a hairbrush.
What is feel?
400
A hedgehog has quills all over its face legs, and belly.
What is add a comma after face
400
A hedgehog looks like a porcupine. The two animals aren't related.
What is A hedgehog looks like a porcupine, but the two animals aren't related.
400
A hedgehog rolls up into a ball when it goes to sleep this protects the softest parts of its body.
What is A hedgehog rolls up into a ball when it goes to sleep. This protects the softest parts of its body. or A hedgehog rolls up into a ball when it goes to sleep which protects the softest parts of its body.
500
Everyday we went with mom to look for fossils.
What is Mom
500
In the dessert it was hot during the day and freezing at night.
What is desert?
500
"This is some vacation" I complained on the first day.
What is add a comma after vacation
500
My mother is a scientist. She teaches at a university. She studies fossils.
What is My mother, the scientist, teaches at the university where she studies fossils. or What is My mother is a scientist, and she teaches at a university where she studies fossils.
500
Wind blew the sand everywhere even our food had sand on it!
What is Wind blew the sand everywhere. Even our food had sand on it! or What is Wind blew the sand everywhere, so even our food had sand on it!
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