Punctuation/Spelling
Even though she works long hours. she keeps working hard after she gets home.
Change the period to a comma after the word--hours. Even though she works long hours, she keeps working hard after she gets home.
They’re/There/Their ready to do the editing and revising exercises for TSIA and SAT.
They’re ready to do the editing and revising exercises for TSIA and SAT.
Dear Mr. President; I would like to request for an interview. Sincerely, Mr. Hamm
Dear Mr. President; --> Dear Mr. President,
I was proud that the plane Ann and I made flew the swiftliest of any in the contest.
Change swiftliest to most swiftly? I was proud that the plane Ann and I made flew the most swiftly of any in the contest.
Because it requires a lot of skill and determination.
Fragment?
My sister needed help with her social study's project this week.
Change the spelling of study's --> studies. My sister needed help with her social studies project this week.
You’re/Your answer in the exam is correct. Congratulations!
Your answer in the exam is correct. Congratulations!
Dear Marsha, Do you want to visit the museum with me? Your best friend, Elizabeth
NO ERROR. NO CHANGE NEEDED
Of the many trucks we looked at today, Jess and I think the last one is the more suitable for hauling equipment.
What is change more suitable to most suitable? Of the many trucks we looked at today, Jess and I think the last one is the most suitable for hauling equipment.
Water can be found in the earth's surface and it can be found under the earth's surface.
Run-on
Its their job to let us know if the games have been rained out.
Change --Its --> It's. It's their job to let us know if the games have been rained out.
Look at the person whose/who’s responsible for your own actions!
Look at the person who’s responsible for your own actions!
"That is great! Stephen did not allow any goals to be scored in tonight's game" said Coach P.
Add a comma after the word game? "That is great! Stephen did not allow any goals to be scored in tonight's game," said Coach P.
Until this year, Becky was the fastest than I was and would always win our races.
What is change fastest to faster? Until this year, Becky was faster than I was and would always win our races.
If you want to become famous.
Fragment?
For a majority of students, it is important to have assignments that are like real world situations.
Add a hyphen between --real and world? For a majority of students, it is important to have assignments that are like real-world situations.
Please check if they’re/there/their are more pencils in Mr. Real’s tool station.
Please check if there are more pencils in Mr. Real’s tool station.
All of those long hours of practice finally paid of!
Change the second of to off. All of those long hours of practice finally paid off!
Val and I were surprised that the class member who agreed with us the more heartily was Ken.
Change more heartily to most heartily? Val and I were surprised that the class member who agreed with us the most heartily was Ken.
Being a straight-A student is great.
Sentence
While I was minding my own business walking through the woods, a scorpion stung me on the foot.
Change the period to an exclamation mark? While I was minding my own business walking through the woods, a scorpion stung me on the foot!
He’s/His our teacher in English – He’s/His name is Mr. Real.
He’s our teacher in English – His name is Mr. Real.
Repeated downpours cause out land to flood, however; the flood do not last too long.
Change do--> does. Repeated downpours cause out land to flood; however, the flood does not last too long.
When compared to Austin, Dallas gets the most rain.
Change the most to more? When compared to Austin, Dallas gets more rain.
When it rains, the rain forms runoff, the abundance of rain causes some areas to flood.
Run-on