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Last summer my family went to visit Aunt Hilda in alaska.
Alaska
The beekeepers was happy to have all our bees.
The beekeepers were happy to have all our bees.
Alaska is rich in forests wildlife, and minerals.
Comma in a series! Alaska is rich in forests, wildlife, and minerals.
It did not take her long to turn casual swiming into a competitive profession.
swiming is spelled - swimming
Man first landed on the moon on July 29 1969.
Add a comma after 29.
Gertrude Ederle was a great american swimmer.
American
She had watched skiers perform during the 2010 winter olympics at Whistler Mountain.
Change 2010 winter olympics to 2010 Winter Olympics...It's a name of an event, so capitalize it!
I like to read stories aloud, Sam said to his mother.
You need quotation marks around the words that Sam says! "I like to read stories aloud," Sam said to his mother.
My mom desided to call some local beekeepers.
desided is spelled incorrectly - decided
He even pours chocolate syrup on his mashed potatos.
change potatos to potatoes.
The silk shoots out through tiny tubes in the spiders body.
spider's
Travis Tran is known for finding ways to waist time in class.
Change waist to waste.
How would you get rid of a huge colony of bees!
This is a question! How would you get rid of a huge colony of bees?
He took all the bees away in two boxs.
boxs should be written boxes.
Jane disaproved of the idea that she couldn't do what any man could do.
Change disaproved to disapproved.
On saturday, the beekeepers came to our house.
Saturday - capitalized
Spider silk is stronger than steal wire.
Change steal to steel.
Tyre did most of the hard work by getting the ground ready, but Guy helped sew our seeds.
Change sew to sow.
She went to the 1924 olympics and won a gold medal as part of the U.S. swim team.
Olympics is a historical event - capitalize it!
As there friendship grew, they became inseparable.
Change there to their.
Maya picked peppers watermelons and lettuce to plant in the garden.
Comma in a series...Maya picked peppers, watermelons, and lettuce to plant in the garden.
I woked up and did not remember where I was.
Change woked to woke.
Mrs.Worling sounded fearfull, but Talon wasn't.
Change fearfull to fearful.
There was to much noise in the room for the baby to sleep.
The first to is used incorrectly, it should be spelled too.
"The nurse will check your eyes today" announced Mrs. Loeung.
Insert a comma after today.