Last summer my family went to visit Aunt Hilda in alaska.
Alaska is the name of a state-capitalize it!
What change, if any, should be made in this sentence? The beekeepers was happy to have all our bees.
Should be... The beekeepers were happy to have all our bees.
What correction should be made to this sentence? Alaska is rich in forests wildlife, and minerals.
Comma in a series! Alaska is rich in forests, wildlife, and minerals.
It did not take her long to turn casual swiming into a competitive profession.
swiming is spelled - swimming
How many states have a town called Valentines
4
Gertrude Ederle was a great american swimmer.
American is a nationality-capitalize it!
Yesterday, Jane disapprove of the quality of the work
Change disapprove to disapproved.
Maya picked peppers watermelons and lettuce to plant in the garden.
Comma in a series...Maya picked peppers, watermelons, and lettuce to plant in the garden.
My mom desided to call some local beekeepers.
desided is spelled incorrectly - decided
Who gets the most valentine day cards
Teachers
She had watched skiers perform during the 2010 winter olympics at Whistler Mountain.
Change 2010 winter olympics to 2010 Winter Olympics...It's the name of an event, so capitalize it!
Jack was angry with Sam right now.
Change was to is
Man first landed on the moon on July 29 1969.
Add a comma after 29.
He took all the bees away in two boxs.
boxs should be written boxes.
True or False
On average, consumers plan to spend upwards of $150 on their partners and loved ones.
True
On saturday the beekeepers came to our house.
Saturday is the name of a day of week. It should be capitalized!
change played to will play
Mrs. Richards, the classroom teacher ate yogurt.
Put a comma after teacher to show the set off.
for for four
True or False
Valentine's Day is one of the least popular days to get engaged.
False
She went to the 1924 olympics and won a gold medal as part of the U.S. swim team.
Olympics si a historical event - capitalize it!
What change, if any, should be made to the following sentence? I woked up and did not remember where I was.
Change woked to woke.
"The nurse will check your eyes today" announced Mrs. Loeung.
Insert a comma after today.
There was to much noise in the room for the baby to sleep.
The first to is used incorrectly, it should be spelled too.
When did Valentine's Day become a holiday?
Near the end of the fifth century or around 500 A.D., Pope Gelasius declared February 14 as St. Valentine's Day.