We went to Florida I saw my grandma.
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I saw a deer in the woods it had a white tail.
I saw a deer in the woods. It had a white tail.
I love that blue dress the color looks great on you.
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My LA teacher wrote a book our library did not have a copy.
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The books are on the table.
Complete sentence
Kayla bought a bathrobe for her brother as a birthday gift it was gray with burgundy stripes.
Kayla bought a bathrobe for her brother as a birthday gift. It was gray with burgundy stripes.
It's really hot today we're going to the ocean.
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Ford is an odd first name we did not choose it for our son.
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Karen was playing loud music it woke the neighbors up.
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Do you like football my dad loves it.
Do you like football? My dad loves it.
I especially enjoy poetry by Emily Dickinson her poems are intense, concise, and revealing.
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Smoking cigarettes is not healthy it can cause lung cancer.
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The dog ate his food then took a nap.
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Parking spaces on campus are limited often I must park far away and walk.
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The bowling alley was not crowded most of the lanes were open.
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I may order Chinese food for dinner I may bake a chicken.
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Yesterday I went to the zoo and my friend came along.
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We rented Rocky to watch on the DVD player later we practiced boxing moves.
We rented Rocky to watch on the DVD player. Later we practiced boxing moves.
Swimming is an excellent form of exercise it gives you a good aerobic workout.
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I neither took out the trash vacuumed the floor.
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