Andrew finds that he can't decide whether he should give Katie or Shalom the tickets. (Is this right or wrong, if wrong, what is the correct answer?)
What is "..he should give the tickets to Katie or Shalom."
Confederates in the Attic, which was written by Andrew Burns, portrays the legacy of the Civil War in the modern South: it is poignant and funny. (Correct or incorrect; if incorrect fix.)
What is Confederates in the Attic, which was written by Andrew Burns, portrays the legacy of the Civil War in the modern South; it is poignant and funny. or Confederates in the Attic, which was written by Andrew Burns, portrays the legacy of the Civil War in the modern South. It is poignant and funny.
Lucas found the sheer magnitude of the Eiffel Tower awesome, but he found the aesthetics less than appealing. (Correct if it need to be corrected.)
What is "Lucas found the sheer magnitude of the Eiffel Tower awesome, but the aesthetics less than appealing.
Kelsey was concerned not only with earning good grades, but she also wanted to understand the material and hoped to make new friends with classmates. (Is this right or wrong, if wrong, what is the correct answer?)
What is Kelsey was concerned not only with earning good grades, but also with understanding the material and with making new friends with classmates.
Although the U.S. House of Representatives conducts very formal debates, they often produce very animated arguments that are louder than the Senate. (Fix.)
What is "Although the U.S. House of Representatives conducts very formal debates, it often produces very animated arguments that are louder the Senate's."