Verb Tense & Consistency
Pronoun Agreement & Clarity
Parallel Structure
Modifiers
Sentence Combining & Style
100

Fix the verb tense:
“Yesterday, she walks to school.”

walked
Why: “Yesterday” signals past tense, so the verb must also be past.

100

Fix the sentence:
“Everyone forgot their homework.”

his or her (or singular they if allowed)
Why: “Everyone” is singular.

100

Fix the sentence:
“She likes running, swimming, and to bike.”

biking
Why: List must be parallel.

100

Fix the sentence:
“She almost drove her kids to school every day.”

She drove her kids to school almost every day.
Why: “Almost” is misplaced.

100

“I was tired. I went to bed.”

 I was tired, so I went to bed.
Why: Combines ideas clearly.

200

Fix the sentence:
“He was running and then falls down.”

fell
Why: Tense must remain consistent (past → past).

200

Fix the sentence:
“Maria told Jessica that she was late.”

Clarify (e.g., “Jessica was late.”)
Why: Unclear pronoun reference.

200

Fix the sentence:
“He enjoys reading books, to play video games, and movies.”

reading, playing, and watching
Why: All items must match form.

200

Fix the sentence:
“After reading the book, the movie was disappointing.”

After reading the book, I found the movie disappointing.
Why: Subject must perform the action.

200

“She studied hard. She passed the test.”

Because she studied hard, she passed.
Why: Shows relationship.

300

Rewrite correctly:
“She has went to the store already.”

has gone
Why: “Has” requires past participle (“gone”).

300

Fix the sentence:
“Each student must bring their book.”

his or her (or singular they)
Why: “Each” is singular.

300

Fix the sentence:
“The goal is to win, practicing hard, and teamwork.”

to win, to practice, and to work
Why: Maintain parallel infinitive structure.

300

Fix the sentence:
“The teacher gave homework to the students that was confusing.”

The teacher gave confusing homework to the students.
Why: Clarifies what is confusing.

300

“The storm was strong. The storm caused damage.”

 The strong storm caused damage.
Why: Removes repetition.

400

Fix the sentence:
“If I was you, I would study more.”

were
Why: Subjunctive mood uses “were” for hypotheticals.

400

Fix the sentence:
“John and me went to the game.”

John and I
Why: Subject pronouns must be used as subjects.

400

Fix the sentence:
“She is not only smart but also has talent.”

not only smart but also talented
Why: Both sides of “not only…but also” must match.

400

Fix the sentence:
“Walking through the hallway, the bell rang loudly and the students were late.”

Walking through the hallway, the students heard the bell ring and were late.
Why: Fixes dangling modifier + ensures subject matches action.

400

“He likes math. He likes science. He likes history.”
Answer: He likes math, science, and history.

Combines efficiently.

500

Fix the sentence:
“By the time we arrived, the movie starts, and people are leaving.”

had started, were leaving
Why: Past perfect for earlier action; past progressive for ongoing past action.

500

Fix the sentence:
“Neither of the girls brought their jacket because they forgot it.”

Answer: her / she (or singular they consistently)
Why: “Neither” is singular → pronouns must agree and remain consistent.

500

Fix the sentence:
“He wanted to succeed, to make money, and happiness.”

to succeed, to make money, and to find happiness
Why: All items must follow same grammatical structure (infinitives).

500

Fix the sentence:

“Walking through the park, the flowers looked beautiful.”

“Walking through the park, we saw that the flowers looked beautiful.”
(or: “As we walked through the park, the flowers looked beautiful.”)

  • Dangling modifier: “Walking through the park” is incorrectly describing flowers
  • The subject must be the one doing the action → we (or a person)
500

Combine:
“She was nervous. She gave the speech anyway. She wanted to succeed.”

Although she was nervous, she gave the speech because she wanted to succeed.
Why: Combines ideas with clear relationships and flow.

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