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What makes this paragraph poor? Find two different reasons and correct the paragraph to make improvements.
Rodney bragged to his friends that he could find his way around anywhere. One day, though, as he was delivering a thing in a strange part of town, he got lost. Though he searched for half an hour, and even used Waze, he could not locate it. Finally he stopped to ask him directions. How silly he felt when he realized that he had passed the house several times.
Rodney bragged to his friends that he could find his way around anywhere. One day, though, as he was delivering pizza in a strange part of town, he got lost. Though he searched for half an hour, even using Waze, he could not locate the house. Finally he stopped to ask a man for directions. How silly he felt when he realized that he had passed the house several times.