The Dangers of Dialogue
Which Word?
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Punctuation Station
100
"I have been wanting to tell you this since I first got here." I said, looking up at her.
"I have been wanting to tell you this since I first got here," I said, looking up at her.
100
Their is to much violence in the U.S.
There is too much violence in the U.S.
100
I was so great full when it was time for lunch.
I was so grateful when it was time for lunch.
100
Marins boyfriend is in Puerto Rico, She shows us his letters and makes us promise not to, tell anybody they're getting married when she goes back.
Marin's boyfriend is in Puerto Rico. She shows us his letters and makes us promise not to tell anybody they're getting married when she goes back.
200
"Let's go see what August wants us to do. Lily said.
"Let's go see what August wants us to do," Lily said.
200
Hear their is too much sadness and not enough sky.
Here there is too much sadness and not enough sky.
200
I tore my closet a part, searching desperately for the perfect outfit to were to the dance. I just couldn't decide weather to were a skirt or pants!
I tore my closet apart, searching desperately for the perfect outfit to wear to the dance. I just couldn't decide whether to wear a skirt or pants!
200
In the school, itself I was disappointed to find, that I was not the most brilliant or even nearly the most brilliant student.
In the school itself I was disappointed to find that I was not the most brilliant or even nearly the most brilliant student. (OR: In the school itself, I was disappointed to find that I was not the most brilliant, or even nearly the most brilliant, student.)
300
"Johnny" I said, once again attempting a smoke ring. "We need to take a breather". "What do you mean, Pony?" Johnny asked.
"Johnny," I said, attempting a smoke ring, "we need to take a breather." "What do you mean, Pony?" Johnny asked.
300
"There probably around here somewhere. You can't tell with all this excitement were they might be." "No." She shook her head. "Their missing. They've been missing for half an hour."
"They're probably around here somewhere. You can't tell with all this excitement where they might be." "No." She shook her head. "They're missing. They've been missing for half an hour."
300
"Wear on earth is my binder?" I cried, as I looked every where in the class room. "I haven't scene it any were," my teacher replied sadly.
"Where on earth is my binder?" I cried, as I looked everywhere in the classroom. "I haven't seen it anywhere," my teacher replied sadly.
300
After I'd sat in the sun for 15 minutes to dry the bleach Johnny let me look in the old cracked mirror we'd found in a closet, I did a double take My hair was even lighter than Sodapop's, I'd never combed it to the side like that
After I'd sat in the sun for 15 minutes to dry the bleach, Johnny let me look in the old cracked mirror we'd found in a closet. I did a double take. My hair was even lighter than Sodapop's. I'd never combed it to the side like that.
400
"Bailey, will you miss me" I asked. "Of course I'll miss you, You're my sister. Bailey replied."
"Bailey, will you miss me?" I asked. "Of course I'll miss you. You're my sister," Bailey replied.
400
We went back and watched the movie threw again. Marcia and Two-Bit where hitting it off fine. Both had the same scatterbrained sense of humor. But Cherry and Johnny and I just sat they're, looking at the movie and not talking to much.
We went back and watched the movie through again. Marcia and Two-Bit were hitting it off fine. Both had the same scatterbrained sense of humor. But Cherry and Johnny and I just sat there, looking at the movie and not talking too much.
400
"I swear if you hurt her I will lock you in a cage in the middle of a forest in the cold freaking whether," she threatened. "Your so evil," he replied. "You no what? Your evil, okay?!" she responded, aggravated.
"I swear if you hurt her I will lock you in a cage in the middle of a forest in the cold freaking weather," she threatened. "You're so evil," he replied. "You know what? You're evil, okay?!" she responded, aggravated.
400
When the kiss was over he looked at me, with burning in his face. Nobody will believe how hard I'm gonna study this year. he said, That jail cell is gonna make me earn grades higher than I ever got when this year is over, nothing can keep me from leaving here and going to college
When the kiss was over, he looked at me with burning in his face. "Nobody will believe how hard I'm gonna study this year," he said. "That jail cell is gonna make me earn grades higher than I ever got. When this year is over, nothing can keep me from leaving here and going to college."
500
"August? I asked trembling with fear i need to tell you something. Yes lily what can i do for you she said looking at me with a smile on her face.
"August?" I asked, trembling with fear. "I need to tell you something." "Yes, Lily, what can I do for you?" she said, looking at me with a smile on her face.
500
What I needed was a boyfriend. A boyfriend would clarify my position to world and, even more important, to my self. A boyfriend's acceptance of me would guide me into that strange and exotic land of frills are femininity.
What I needed was a boyfriend. A boyfriend would clarify my position to the world and, even more important, to myself. A boyfriend's acceptance of me would guide me into that strange and exotic land of frills and femininity.
500
"You may be want to dance?" The words escaped her mouth in a quick breathe, worry taking her over. "Or I could go get us so me punch?" "Um...punch..." Ryan mumbled, finally grasping her crush, "would be grate."
"You maybe want to dance?" The words escaped her mouth in a quick breath, worry taking her over. "Or I could go get us some punch?" "Um...punch..." Ryan mumbled, finally grasping her crush, "would be grate."
500
i did cherry saw the same things in dallas that was why she was afraid to see him afraid of loving him i knew what she meant alright but she also meant she wouldn't go see johnny because he had killed bob
I did. Cherry saw the same things in Dallas. That was why she was afraid to see him, afraid of loving him. I knew what she meant alright. But she also meant she wouldn't go see Johnny because he had killed Bob. (OR: I knew what she meant alright, but she also meant she wouldn't go see Johnny because he had killed Bob.)
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