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Which is the best thesis statement?
a) A hero is brave, helps others, and never gives up.
b) "A hero is someone who gives his life for something greater than himself."
c) I think a hero is brave when faced with tough situations, helps others no matter the cost, and never gives up when the going gets tough.
d) A hero is brave when faced with tough situations, helps others no matter the cost, and never gives up when the going gets tough.
d) A hero is brave when faced with tough situations, helps others no matter the cost, and never gives up when the going gets tough.
Why? It's specific, features good diction, and doesn't use any personal pronouns (I, my, you).
b was a quote...a good hook, but doesn't work for a thesis statement.