Correct or wrong?
Lilly loved her first week at Lab she made a lot of new friends.
Lilly loved her first week at Lab. She made a lot of new friends.
Went to school.
Who?
I went to the store I got cookies.
I went to the store. I got cookies.
I like sandwiches so much. I make them all the time.
Correct.
Went on a cruise to the Bahamas.
(Subject) went on a cruise to the Bahamas.
Whenever my sister sings.
What happens?
Ally Nickerson is worried about her new teacher she does not want to lose her "get out of jail free" card.
Ally Nickerson is worried about her new teacher. She does not want to lose her "get out of jail free" card.
My dad went to Chipotle to get food, and my mom went to the grocery store to buy snacks.
Correct.
Watching movies are my favorite the popcorn is my favorite part.
Watching movies are my favorite. The popcorn is my favorite part.
My big plate of food.
Did what?
Joe asked his mom for money he wanted to buy a new Lego set.
Joe asked his mom for money. He wanted to buy a new Lego set.
After we ate lunch, we went to the pool.
Correct
And I need to buy a new one.
(Something happened) and I need to buy a new one.
After the show.
What happens?
The family wants to take a fun vacation next year this year their vacation was cancelled.
The family wants to take a fun vacation next year. This year their vacation was cancelled.
Before I could go to school.
Wrong.
Because I get tired.
That doll with red hair.
Did what?
The Lab School is an awesome school I love doing activities in my club class.
The Lab School is an awesome school. I love doing activities in my club class.