Sentence Fragments
What is missing in this sentence: The first people to live in North America.
the verb
What are 3 ways to correct a run-on sentence?
FANBOYS
Semi-colon ;
Period .
What are the 5 sensory details?
Looks, sounds, smells, tastes, and feels
Complete the sentence with parallel structure: A chess chamion needs to be intelligent, patient, and _________________.
Imaginative, innovative, etc.
How many states are in the United States?
50
What is missing in this sentence: In North America during the 1500s.
BOTH the verb and the subject
Sometimes I ride down the hill, and I convince my brother to bring the sled back up.
Why do details help readers?
Is this sentence parallel or not?
Playing chess and when she listens to music relax my friend Natalie.
NOT parallel
What is the motto at Dexter Southfield?
Best today, better tomorrow
Is this a complete sentence or fragment?
Even though drums are the coolest instrument.
Sentence Fragment
Fix the run-on: We ate a lot of food and watched movies.
TRICK QUESTION: It's correct.
Add details to this sentence: Many animals are good swimmers.
Answers vary
What is the purpose of parallel structure?
Writers use parallel structure to create balance and rhythm in their sentences
What is the largest planet in our solar system?
Jupiter
Fix the fragment: My sister asked me. If I would like to attend another concert.
My sister asked me if I would like to attend another concert.
Fix the run-on: You can bundle up and play in the snow, you can ski or skate.
You can bundle up and play in the snow, or you can ski and skate.
What questions do you want to avoid readers asking?
Who? What? When? Where? and Why?
These questions should already be answered through your writing.
which one is NOT parallel:
had run and had won
a shout, a whisper, the cry
loud and strong
a shout, a whisper, the cry
What is the fastest running bird?
Emu
Correct the sentence fragment: Included two drummers and one guitarist.
Then, explain what was missing.
The band included two drummers and one guitarist.
The subject was missing.
Explain why this is NOT a run-on sentence: Kristy slammed on the door and ran down the steps.
You don't need a comma because it has a compound verb and is not a run on sentence.
What is an example of a cliche?
It's raining cats and dogs
Correct the parallel structure: Other creatures in Greek myths were found living in the water, or they lived on a mountain.
Answers vary
When is Ms. Spaeth's birthday?
June 1, 1998