Communicating like Lincoln
The word good is not the most effective word to use in sentence 31. Which word should replace good in the sentence?
B. positive
What change, if any, is needed in sentence 8?
F. Change Classified to classified
What change should be made in sentence 2?
C. Change responsability to responsibility
What is the most effective revision to make in sentence 12?
B. Lincoln utilized his knowledge of the writings of prominent figures as well as his developed storytelling skills to help shape his platform for president.
What change should be made in sentence 19?
F. Change minerallogical to mineralogical
How does sentence 18 need to be changed?
B. Change Adoption Certificate to adoption certificate
What is the most effective way to combine sentences 8 and 9?
H. He would retell the stories he had heard to his young friends, simplifying the language and expressions so they could understand.
What change should Jazmin make in sentence 11?
C. Change tektonic to tectonic
What change, if any, should be made in sentence 9?
F. Insert a comma after WAF
Luka has included a redundant idea in the third paragraph (sentences 12–19). Which sentence should be deleted from the paragraph?
G. Sentence 14
What is the correct way to write sentences 21 and 22?
D. If there is a shocking cave like this 980 feet below the surface of Mexico, then there could be more discoveries just like it in other parts of the world.
What change is needed in sentence 23?
J. Change the comma after programs to a semicolon