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Bill, Jill, Bo, Joe, and I are going down to the fair for corndogs
period at the end
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Can we visit tokyo, Japan when I am older?
Capitalize Tokyo
Every paragraph should start with what?
INDENT!
Name a type of hook
quote/lyric, figurative language, facts/statistics, Question (last resort), anecdote
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When are we going to visit grandma in florida again?
Capitalize Florida
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"Can we have more apple pie? said John.
Quotes after pie and question mark
What does the beginning of every introduction need to grab the reader's attention?
a hook!
What is an anecdote?
short story/Personal experience
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She were going to Walmart, but she had a coupon for Target.
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When will he stop trying two cheat on his tests?
two --> to
How many body paragraphs should you have?
2
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There are alot of clothes on the floor.
change alot to a lot
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Their going to go to work on Thursday and Friday at Taco Bell.
Their to They're
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Jennifer try to play with her friends, but they were in quarantine.
try to tried
What is the last paragraph?
conclusion
Name a way to substantiate an opinion
facts, experts, details,
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Billy and i like cinnamon rolls and chocolate milk to.
Capitalize I. to --> too
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I cant help but notice that the cafeteria food smells good.
apostrophe in can't
The hook and the thesis make up which paragraph?
the introduction
What is Mrs. Brown's favorite color?
lavender