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Bill, Jill, Bo, Joe, and I are going down to the fair for corndogs
period at the end
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Can we visit tokyo, Japan when I am older?
Capitalize Tokyo
What is the very first thing we do when we start an essay?
thesis
How many kinds of hooks are there?
6
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When are we going to visit grandma in florida again?
Capitalize Florida
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"Can we have more apple pie? said John.
Quotes after pie and question mark
What does the beginning of every introduction need to captivate the reader?
a hook!
What is an anecdote?
Personal experience
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She were going to Walmart, but she had a coupon for Target.
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When will he stop trying two cheat on his tests?
two --> to
WHat is peeel?
Point
explanation
evidence
explanation
link
What is a strategy we use in writing?
CUPS, ARMS, pitchforking...etc
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Their going to go to work on Thursday and Friday at Taco Bell.
Their to They're
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Jennifer try to play with her friends, but they were in quarantine.
try to tried
What goes into your conclusion?
Restate thesis
What should we always do before we start to type our essay?
BRAINSTORM!!
Find the editing error: Hint* 2 errors
Billy and i like cinnamon rolls and chocolate milk to.
Capitalize I. to --> too
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I cant help but notice that the cafeteria food smells good.
apostrophe in can't
What is your thesis called in an argumentative essay?
Claim
Where, in our essay, do we need to state our topic of the essay?
In the introduction