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Mu mother and my sister (don't/ doesn't) watch T.V.
don't
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Some types of food are even better. Erick wants to improve his introduction.

How can sentence 2 be rewritten  to provide more detail and imagery? 

A. The organic versions of these foods are even better for human combustion. 

B. Many people eat a wide variety of healthy foods. 

C. Corn, beans, potatoes and peanuts can give people lots of good vitamins. 

D. These foods taste good when cooked.

 A. The organic versions of these foods are even better for human combustion.

100
Because I passed the STAAR I will be able to move onto eighth grade.


 A. Change STAAR to staar

 B. Change will be to am 

C. Add a comma after STAAR

 D. Change to to too

 C. Because I passed the STAAR, I will be able to move onto eighth grade.


100
 

Which is correct?

A. The rabbits fur is soft.

B. The rabbit's fur is soft.

C. The rabbites fur is soft.

B. The rabbit's fur is soft.

100
________ , the teacher told me where I needed to sit.


 A. Lastly

 B. Yet 

C. Therefore 

D. In conclusion

 A. Lastly?

 Lastly, the teacher told me where I needed to sit.

100
I would rather read a book (then/than) go to the movies.

 than

 I would rather read a book than go to the movies.

200
Either string beans or broccoli (are/is) my favorite vegetable.
are
200

 The mind will be sharper, clearer, and better able to survive life's ups and downs, and like a well-trimmed ship on a stormy sea. 

What is the best revision to make for the above sentence?


 A. The mind will be sharper, clearer, and better able to survive life's ups and downs and a well-trimmed ship on a stormy sea. 

B. The mind will be sharper, clearer, and better able to survive life's ups and downs, and like a well-trimmed ship on a stormy sea. 

C. The mind will be sharper, clearer, and better able to survive life's ups and downs like a well-trimmed ship on a stormy sea. 

D. The mind will be sharper, clearer, and better able to survive life's ups and downs, and like a well-trimmed ship on a stormy sea it will survive.

 C. The mind will be sharper, clearer, and better able to survive life's ups and downs like a well-trimmed ship on a stormy sea.

200
You may choose to do this project as a solitary figure or enlist the help of several able and willing Friends.


 A. Change choose to chose 

B. Change several to severel 

c. Change Friends to friends 

D. Make no change

C. You may choose to do this project as a solitary figure or enlist the help of several able and willing friends.

200

Which is correct?

A. I saw babies children and adults at the carnival.

B. I saw babies children, and adults at the carnival.

C. I saw babies, children, and adults at the carnival.

C. I saw babies, children, and adults at the carnival.

200
We played as a team. ______, we came in first place.


 A. First 

B. Because

 C. Thus 

D. But

 C. Thus:

We played as a team. Thus, we came in first place.

200
Will you please tell me when (a/an) hour is up?

an

Will you please tell when an hour is up?

300
Your hands and feet (contains/contain) nearly half the bones in your body.
contain
300
At least five items of fruits and vegetables should be eaten daily. Brittany did not choose the most effective words in sentence 

What is the BEST change for her to make in this sentence? 

 A. Change at least to anyhow 

B. Change items to servings 

C. Change should to might 

D. Change eaten to put away

 B. Change items to servings

300
I went to the store, and bought some gum; the game. Edit this sentence...


A. I went to the store, and bought some gum before the game. 

B. I went to the store and brought some gum before the game. 

C. I went too the store and bought some gum before the game. 

D. I went to the store and bought some gum before the game.

 D. I went to the store and bought some gum before the game.

300

Which is correct?

A. The Three Little Pigs is my favorite picture book.

B. The three little Pigs is my favorite picture book.

C. The three Little Pigs is my favorite picture book.

A. The Three Little Pigs is my favorite picture book.

300
______, I walked home whit my head held high. 


 A. After that 

B. Again

 C. Likewise 

D. While

 A. After that

After that, I walked home whit my head held high.

300

Which sentence is written correctly?

A. I need you to take out the following: a pencil, a paper, and a highlighter.

B. I need you: to take out following a pencil, a paper, and a highlighter.

A.
400
Everybody at the 4th of July parade (were/was) carrying an American flag.
was
400
 And if done properly, a healthy diet and daily exercise can provide persons with fool-proof defenses against the ever advancing adversary of time. 

What change if any should be made?


 A. Change properly to good 

B. Change exercise to work 

C. Change persons to people 

D. Change advancing to moving

 C. Change persons to people

400
I cleaned my room, therefore, my parents let me go out and play. 


 A. Change cleaned to cleans

 B. Change the , before therefore to a ;

 C. Remove the comma after therefore 

D. Make no change

 B. I cleaned my room; therefore, my parents let me go out and play.

400

Is this sentence written correctly? YES or NO.


My family speaks Spanish at home.

Yes

400
He did not finish his work, ___ his parents still let him go out and play. 


 A. To conclude 

B. Similarly

 C. Lastly

 D. Yet

D. Yet:

 He did not finish his work, yet his parents still let him go out and play

400

I attended Saturday school on April 7th, I will pass the STAAR. Edit the sentence.

A. I attended Saturday school on April 7th I will. Pass the STAAR.

B. I attended Saturday school on April 7th; I will past the STAAR.

A.
500

Each of the Girl Scouts (does/do) a community service project.

does
500
Sentence (9) Cooking the fruits causes the nutrients to decrease. (10) Cooking vegetables does this, too. What is the correct way to combine sentences 9 and 10? 


A. Cooking fruits and vegetables, this causes the nutrients to decrease. 

B. Cooking fruits and vegetables and it causes the nutrients to decrease 

C. Cooking fruits and vegetables. It causes the nutrients to decrease. 

D. Cooking fruits and vegetables causes the nutrients to decrease.

 D. Cooking fruits and vegetables causes the nutrients to decrease.

500
" I love to read," said Ms. Cogdell " because it allows me to escape into different worlds." 


 A. " I love to read" said Ms. Cogdell, " Because it allows me to escape into different worlds."

 B. " I love to read" said Ms. Cogdell, " because it allows me to escape into different worlds." 

C. " I love to read," said Ms Cogdell, " because it allows me to escape into different worlds." 

D." I love to read," said Ms. Cogdell, " Because it allows me to escape into different worlds."

 D " I love to read," said Ms. Cogdell, " Because it allows me to escape into different worlds."

500

What change should be made to this sentence?

The E.O.C. English I S.T.A.A.R. test is on Tuesday you are ready!

  A. add a semi-colon after IS

B. add a semi-colon after Tuesday

C. No semi-colon needed

B. Add a semi-colon after Tuesday

500
_______ we went to the mall to go shopping.


 A. Went 

B. Yesterday 

C. To go 

D. Uh?

 B. Yesterday
500
I need to speak to the following : Martha, Sandra, and Isaac.


 OR  

I need to speak to the following, Martha, Sandra, and Isaac.

I need to speak to the following : Martha, Sandra, and Isaac.

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