Editing #1
A. change took to had took
B. Insert a comma after vacation
C. Change city to City
D. Make no change
A. She was also a birthday present she was meant to celebrate America's independence from Great Britain.
B. She was also a birthday present meant to celebrate. America's independence from Great Britain.
C. She was also a birthday present. Which was meant to celebrate America's independence from Great Britain.
D. She was also a birthday present meant to celebrate America's independence from Great Britain.
No fragments
(Game)
1. What is the BEST way to combine sentences 2 and 3?
A. She can't wait to play Zoo Madness, so she skips through the introduction and gets right to the action.
B.She can't wait to play Zoo Madness because she skips through the introduction and gets right to the action.
C. She can't wait to play Zoo Madness, she skips through the introduction and gets right to the action.
D. She can't wait to play Zoo Madness, and she skips through the introduction and gets right to the action.
A. She can't wait to play Zoo Madness, so she skips through the introduction and gets right to the action.
Cause and Effect relationship!
A. It's a rhinoceros! Oh, no!
B. Uh-oh! Another animal is just around the corner.
C. Then Lauren hears a stomp and a huff.
D. The tiger is trapped and won't be going anywhere.
C. Then Lauren hears a stomp and a huff.
She doesn't know what animal it is, but it makes her look around the corner.
A. Change more perfect to perfecter
B. Change the period to a question mark
C. Insert quotation marks at the end of the sentence
D. Sentence 5 should not be changed
The sentence is asking a question!
A. Change French to french
B. Change were to was
C. Change they to it
D. Change revolutionary war to Revolutionary War
D. Change revolutionary war to Revolutionary War
Proper Noun!
[Feeling startled, she shakes her head and sits up straight.]
Where is the BEST place to insert this sentence?
F. At the beginning of the paragraph?
G. After sentence 6
H. After sentence 8
J. After sentence 9
J. After sentence 9
She's startled because of the loud noise
F. her game
G. her shoulder
H. the voice
J. the rhino
She got hit in her shoulder!
A. Lady Liberty was designed in France. Because she was made out of copper and steel.
B. Lady Liberty was designed in France and made out of copper and steel.
C. Lady Liberty was designed in France. And made out of copper and steel.
Sentence 8 is correct.
The sentence in the passage is a run on. A and C both have fragments.
A. Change In 1886 to It was in 1886
B. Change country's to countries
C. Delete most
D. No change needs to be made.
Most and -est mean the same!
F. Change She to They
G. Change in 350 to she was in 350
H. Change piece's to pieces
J. No change should be made
Plural not possessive
How does sentence 21 need to be changed?
A. Change beleive to believe
B. Change rays to ray's
C. Insert a comma after oceans.
D. Sentence 21 does not need to be changed
A. Change beleive to believe
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