The Skin You're In
Buffalo Bill's Wild West Show
Grady the Famous Cow
From Disappointment to Purpose
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8)Brianna has not used the most effective transition in sentence 10. Read the second paragraph again. Which transition should replace the word INSTEAD in sentence 10?
What is letter G) However
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12) What change should be made in sentence 6?
What is letter G) Insert a comma after Cody
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3) Sentence 12 lacks clarity. What is the best way to improve this sentence?
What is letter A) change when they to when Mach and the veterinarian
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18) What change should be made in sentence 7?
What is letter F) change the comma to a period
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22) What change needs to be made in sentence 40?
What is letter F) change occasionaly to occasionally
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7) Brianna realizes that she did not include a position statement in this paper. Which sentence could follow sentence 3 and serve as the position statement for her paper?
What is letter D) Skin cancer is on the rise among young people, and teens should make some basic lifestyle changes to help slow this trend.
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15) What change should be made in sentence 17?
What is letter D) change Americas' to America's
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2) What is the most effective way to combine sentences 7 and 8?
What is letter F) Afterward Grady became upset and ran toward the nearest source of light, probably thinking it was an exit from the barn.
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19) How should sentence 16 be changed?
What is letter D) change recomendation to recommendation
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6) Xavier would like to improve the closing paragraph by replacing sentence 32. Which of the following could best replace sentence 32 and help strengthen this paper's closing.
What is letter J) It was a unique tale of a cow's rescue, but it was also an inspiring story of American ingenuity and determination.
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11) Brianna is not pleased with the way she has closed her paper. Which of the following could replace sentence 28 and more effectively close this paper.
What is letter D) Take action now to protect your skin and avoid this life-threatening disease later.
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13) Howe should sentence 9 be changed?
What is letter C) change pony express to Pony Express
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1) What is the most effective revision to make in sentence 3?
What is letter C) But it wasn't often that a news story about cow was so remarkable that it made national headlines for a week and engaged the problem solving skills of people all over the country.
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17) What change should be made in sentence 3?
What is letter B) change good to well
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Find the error in this sentence: The Wild West Show disbanded just before World War I, at the time it was declared the most successful traveling show of all time.
What is a missing FANBOY
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9) Which sentence below would best follow and support sentence 15?
What is letter A) Adequate protection is vital because just one blistering sunburn in childhood or adolescence greatly increases a person's risk of developing melanoma later in life.
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16) What is the correct way to write sentences 30 and 31?
What is letter F) When the Wild West Show disbanded just before World War I, it was declared the most successful traveling show of all time.
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4) Xavier would like to add some sentences to help transition from the third paragraph to the fourth paragraph. Which of the following could Xavier add after sentence 17?
What is letter J) Each suggestion had its own problems. And in the meantime Grady remained Stuck.
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21) What change needs to made in sentence 27?
What is letter C) change loose to lose
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Should I change the word PAGEANT to PAGENT? Why or Why not?
What is no, the first spelling is correct.
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10) What is the most effective revision to make in sentence 24?
What is letter G) Although few moles actually develop into melanoma, only an expert can determine whether a person is at risk by carefully examining cells from the suscpicious mole under a microscope.
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14) What change should be made in sentence 15?
What is letter H) change their to his
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5) Xavier realizes that he should have added the following sentence to the fourth paragraph One Newspaper highlighted Partridge's arrival, claiming that he was coming with "secret cow-freeing equipment." Where is the most effective place to insert this sentence?
What is letter B) After sentence 19
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20) What change should be made in sentence 18?
What is letter H) change calls to called
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Which is correct? My shoelace is loose. or My shoelace is lose.
What is My shoelace is loose.
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