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# of errors: 6
Upon exiting the classroom I saw a bear, a rhino, and a hippo. They were very scary, and wanted to hurt me. But, then someone showed up and he made them go away. What I would’ve done without that person I do not know. I want to thank him, because he saved my life.
Upon exiting the classroom, I saw a bear, a rhino and a hippo. They were very scary and wanted to hurt me. But then someone showed up, and he made them go away. What I would’ve done without that person, I do not know. I want to thank him because he saved my life.
-Comma after introductory clauses
-No Oxford comma
-Don't separate a subject from its verb
-Don't put a comma after BUT (and/for/nor/so/yet) if it starts the sentence
-Don't fuse two sentences (run-on)
-When you have a subordinate clause starting your sentence, use a comma at the end of it
-BUT don't use a comma BEFORE a subordinate clause