Introduction
This is what part of the introduction paragraph:
How would you feel if you woke up and you were suddenly a different person?
What is the hook statement?
What part of the introduction do the body paragraphs correlate to?
Detail 1, Detail 2, and Detail 3
What are the three parts of a conclusion paragraph?
Restate Thesis
Commentary (key takeaways)
So What
What part of speech are the following words
Go, think, write, dress, play,
Verbs
What is the formula of a thesis (include punctuation)
Restate/answer prompt, because detail1, detail2, and detail3.
Hook
Commentary/Background information
Thesis
How would you introduce this quote?
"Studies have found that although peopel who skip breakfast eat slightly fewer calories during the day, they tend to have a high body mass index (BMI)" Christy C. Tangy Ph.D
According to Christy C Tangy, "Studies have found that although peopel who skip breakfast eat slightly fewer calories during the day, they tend to have a high body mass index (BMI)"
Why does this(your essay) matter?
What should your reader do about it?
What part of speech are the following words
pretty, funny, exciting, weird, ugly
adjectives
What two things are needed in every complete sentence?
Subject and predicate(verb)
What is the function of the commentary in the introduction paragraph?
To provide background information
What are the 5 parts of a body paragraph
Point/topic
Example
Evidence
Explain
Review/closing
What is the function of the commentary in the conclusion?
Key takeaways/ one key idea argument from each body paragraph
Which word(s) in the following sentence is a conjunction
Humans should plant more trees, because we need them to breath, they keep our air clean, and they keep our earth clean.
because; and
When do you need to skip/go to the next line when writing?
When you start a new paragraph
Combine the following information into a sufficient thesis statement.
Prompt: Write an essay detailing why breakfast is the most important meal of the day.
detail: it gets you energized for the day
detail: it increases your performance
detail: it helps keep you healthy
Breakfast is the most important meal of the day, because it gets you energized for the day, it increases your performance, and it helps keep you healthy.
Based on the thesis statement, write the three topic sentences.
School lunches should be free because all students need food to eat, it make the school more equitable, and it increases performance.
School lunches should be free because it makes the school more equitable.
School lunches should be free because it increases performance.
How would you adjust this conclusion paragraph?
The aquarium has a lot of information about fish and other marine animals, it is an opportunity to see new fish, and its overall fun, so it is the best activity to do indoors. By going to an aquarium you can see and read about all sorts of aquatic life. So the next time you have an opportunity, go to the aquarium with your friends or family!
Add additional key takeaways.
Which word(s) in this sentence is an adverb
Although turtles move very slowly, they are one of earths most incredible animals.
very, slowly, most
What is the error in this paragraph
People all over the world enjoy going to water parks Feeling the cool water on ones skin especially when the sun is so hot can really cool you down Over the summer everyone is trying to go to a water park Water parks are fun because they cool you off they have lots of fun rides and they're a fun place to spend the day
It is missing all punctuation
Write a sentence that completes the following introduction paragraph.
Prompt: Should students be allowed to pick their own schedules?
Have you ever been in a class and wondered why you needed to be there? Many students feel this way with at least one of their classes. As it is, many students are told which classes they have to take and they don't have any choice, so many kids don't like those classes.
Students should be allowed to pick their own schedules, because [three details]
Going to the zoo is an amazing experience because it allows people to get to see animals up close. When people learn about animals in books or by watching videos it is hard to understand how they are really like. This shows that by going to the zoo, people can see animals in their natural environment, having a deeper understand of them. Therefore, you can learn more about animals by seeing them up close at a zoo.
Include evidence
How would you fix this paragraph?
Breakfast is the most important meal of the day as it gives you energy. Those who eat breakfast consistently show that they have a higher metabolism. They also are able to perform better since they are not hungry. They overall have a better diet. If you want to be healthier wake up earlier and eat your breakfast!
Properly restate the thesis.
What word(s) in this sentence is a preposition?
Students should pay attention in school since teachers work hard to work with you to help you learn.
in;with
What is wrong with this paragraph
Do you think alot of people do their homework. School can be stressful for alot of students so they sometimes don't do their homework. Homework is meant to help them learn concepts, but it may not be reasonable. Homework should be banned because alot of kids already don't do it, it places extra stress on students, and its not fair.
'a lot' is misspelled