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OER
IDELC
Revise and Edit
Literary Terms
100
WORTH DOUBLE POINTS!!! This tool can be used on all parts of the TAKS except for the revise and edit section.
What is the dictionary.
100
What OER stands for.
What is Open Ended Response.
100
The First paragraph in IDELC. Gives a brief description of the situation. Explains to the reader what the writer will be talking about.
What is Introduction
100
He decided to partner with his older brother Roy and starts another company. The correct way to fix this sentence sould be... A) Change decided to desided B) Change his to their C) Insert a comma after Roy D) Change starts to start
What is D
100
This is the main character in a story. Usually, it is the good guy.
What is protagonist
200
A hint or clue about what will happen later in a story
What is Foreshadow
200
WORTH DOUBLE POINTS!!! What ACE stands for.
What is Answer, Cite evidence, Expand or explain
200
The second paragraph of IDELC. Tells the story in as much detail as possible.
What is Description
200
During world war I, when Walter was just 16, he joined the Red Cross and reported to France to drive an amublance. What change, if any, should be made in sentence 8? A) Change world war to World War B) Delete the comma after 16 C) Change reported to reports D) Make no change
What is A
200
The time and place a story happens.
What is setting
300
This interrupts the normal sequence of events to tell about something that happened in the past.
What is flashback
300
The highest grade someone can earn on an OER.
What is three
300
WORTH DOUBLE POINTS!!! The third paragraph of IDELC. Tells how the writer or other people in the story felt or reacted during the situation.
What is Emotion
300
He didn't cover his vehicle with the traditional camouflage. He covered it with his own drawings. What is the best way to combine these sentences? A)He didn't cover his vehicle with the traditional camouflage, and he covered it with his own drawings. B) He didn't cover his vehicle with the traditional camouflage he covered it with his own drawings. C) Instead of covering his vehicle with the traditional camouflage, he covered it with his own drawings. D) Not covering his vehicle with the traditional camouflage, he covered it with his own drawings.
What is C
300
A struggle between opposing forces. Can be external or internal
What is conflict
400
I grinned as I walked up to except the prize. What change if any should be made in this sentence. A) Insert a comma after grinned B) Change walked to walk C) Change except to accept D) Make no change
What is C
400
An answer that contains analysis and relevant evidence or analysis and evidence with a connection that is clear and specific would get this grade.
What is two
400
The third paragraph of IDELC. This talks about what insight the writer gained from the situation.
What is Learned
400
WORTH DOUBLE POINTS!!! Glancing up at the prizes, each trophy I noticed was glistening in the summer sun. How should sentence 7 be revised? A) I glanced up at the prizes, and I noticed each trophy. Glistening in the summer sun. B) Glancing up a the prizes. I noticed that each trophy was glistening in the summer sun. C) I glanced up at the prizes, I noticed that each trophy was glistening in the summer sun. D) Glancing up at the prizes, I noticed that each trophy was glistening in the summer sun.
What is D
400
The correct order for plot would be: A)climax, resolution, falling action, rising action, introduction B)falling action, introduction, climax, rising action, resolution C)Introduction, rising action, climax, falling action, resolution. D)Introduction, climax, resolution, falling action, rising action
What is C
500
In “Set Free” the boy feels as though the dog is unhappy living its life lunging and jerking at the end of a cord. The boy shares the dog’s inability to control his circumstances. He felt that the cable restricting the dog’s freedom “…was like the frustration he felt when his father held him tight in his arms and wouldn’t let go.” The boy simply had to do something to improve this situation, even if it meant losing his “closest friend.” This answer would recieve this grade
What is three
500
The fifth paragraph of IDELC. This paragraph ends the essay. Makes a connection with the world and the human experience.
What is Conclusion
500
I could just picture one of those trophies sat on the top shelf of the bookcase in my room. What change, if any, should be made to this sentence? A) Insert it after picture B) Change sat to sitting C) Insert a comma after shelf D) Make no change
B
500
Worth Double points!!! The theme for this story would be what? Once there was a mean little boy who lived in a small village. This mean little boy loved to mess with people, so one day he ran up to a sheep herder and shouted, “WOLF! WOLF! A wolf is attacking the town!” The sheep herder grabbed his staff and ran to defend the town, but realized he had been fooled when the boy started pointing and laughing at him. “Ha ha! I made you jump,” said the boy. Then the boy ran up to a farmer and shouted, “WOLF! WOLF! A wolf is attacking the town!” The farmer grabbed his pitchfork and ran to defend the town, but when the boy started pointing and laughing at him, he realized he had been tricked. As the boy went back to his family’s farm laughing about the funny trick he played, he saw a real wolf in his father’s chicken coop. As the wolf ate all of his father’s chickens, the boy screamed over and over again, “WOLF! WOLF! Please help us!” But nobody came to help him.
What is "Never cry wolf" (one shouldn't tell lies because nobody will believe them when they are telling the truth)
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