Mechanics
English
Writing
Grammar
Punctuation
100
I need to buy eggs milk lettuce and bread
What is: I need to buy eggs, milk, lettuce, and bread.
100
Hi how are you
What is: Hi, how are you?
100

"We need to buy more sugar" she said "before it runs out"

What is: "We need to buy more sugar," she said, "before it runs out."

100
Without water the plant will die
What is: Without water, the plant will die.
100
Amy Rivers my best friend is going to the mall today
What is: Amy Rivers, my best friend, is going to the mall today.
200
She doesn't like me or you.
What is: She doesn't like me or you.
200
Because it was hot we went swimming.
What is: Because it was hot, we went swimming.
200

My mother on the other hand does not like chocolate

What is: My mother, on the other hand, does not like chocolate.

200
Despite seeing you yesterday I don't recognize you.
What is: Despite seeing you yesterday, I don't recognize you.
200
I am ready for my dad a hard-working man to come home
What is: I am ready for my dad, a hard-working man, to come home.
300
Jane likes fruit however she does not like apples
What is: Jane likes fruit; however, she does not like apples.
300

Charles always comes to class on time whereas Janice never does.

What is: Charles always comes to class on time whereas Janice never does.

300

My father never cries in fact he never shows any emotion at all.

What is: My father never cries; in fact, he never shows any emotion at all.

300
Having smoked for 16 years it is not easy to quit.
What is: Having smoked for 16 years, it's not easy to quit.
300
In spite of studying hard for the test I failed.
What is: In spite of studying hard for the test I failed.
400
Wring essays is easy it just takes a little practice.
What is: Writing essays is easy; it just takes a little practice.
400

Technology is changing our lives in harmful ways for instance the computer is replacing human contact.

What is : Technology is changing our lives in harmful ways; for instance, the computer is replacing human contact.

400

In general I enjoy my writing class the amount of homework our teacher assigns is definitely not exciting however.

What is: In general, I enjoy my writing class; the amount of homework our teacher assigns is definitely not exciting, however.

400
Some people feel that grades are unnecessary on the other hand some people feel that grades motivate students.
What is: Some people feel that grades are unnecessary on the other hand some people feel that grades motivate students.
400
For instance I love taking long walks on the beach.
What is: For instance, I love taking long walks on the beach.
500
The company's net profit declined last year although its sales increased.
What is: The company's net profit declined last year although its sales increased.
500

People hardly ever talk face-to-face anymore as a consequence they lack social skills.

What is: People hardly ever talk face-to-face anymore; as a consequence, they lack social skills.

500
I told you to meet me at the front of the classroom instead you went to the back of the classroom.
What is: I told you to meet me at the front of the classroom; instead, you went to the back fo the classroom.
500
My favorite leisure-time activities are going to the movies especially musicals reading novels especially stories of love and adventure listening to music both rock and classical and participating in sorts particularly tennis and volleyball.
What is: My favorite leisure-time activities are going to the movies, especially musicals; reading novels, especially stories of love and adventure; listening to music, both rock and classical; and participating in sports, particularly tennis and volleyball.
500
For example they display the human emotions of joy and sadness.
What is: For example, they display the human emotions of joy and sadness.
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